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Re: Come Waker Me Up
Hello rascalover! CHRISSY321 here with a quick review! I really love how this is going. I really do think that this is going to turn into a great story. You ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: The End is Coming
Hello felista! CHRISSY321 here with a quick review! I really enjoyed this poem! I loved all of the descriptive scenes, and the way you made it all work together! He ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Black Scale (a snippet of Ch. 1)
Hi @Holysocks! CHRISSY31 here with a nice review for your snippet! *Happy review day!* :leia This was great! This nice little area from a chapter was so great, and full ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Draft #1
Hi @Adriannal2448 ! CHRISSY321 here with a review! *Happy Review Day!* :leia This was a great story! I loved it! As I was reading though, I did see a few ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Bottles
Hi @BlueDaisy2018! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy review day!* :leia I really love this. It was great, and when you find out the main narrator is the one dead ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Sleep
Hello @matthewmazer ! CHRISSY321 here to drop a little review! There is honestly nothing to fix!I really love this poem! It is just really nice, and kept short- short and ...
Dec 29, 2015 -
Re: What If
Hey herbgirl! CHRISSY321 back again literally 30 seconds between reviewing you other work! :smt024 *Happy Holidays! :smt111 * Hi again! Okay, much like you work 'The Great White Whale' The ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: The Great White Whale
Hello herbgirl! CHRISSY321 here to drop by with a quick little review! :smt024 *Happy Holidays! :smt111 * Okay, so I went into the green room, and saw this, and the ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: not all surprises want to be unwrapped.
Hi Savvy! CHRISSY321 here to drop a quick little review! :smt024 *Happy Holidays! :smt111 * Okay, so first off I really wanted to say that the title of this really ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Dear Santa Claus
Hey SnazzyPencil! CHRISSY321 stopping by real quick with a little review. I really loved this! It was so cute, and I can really imagine some little smart kid with a ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: Empousa
Hey Artemis28! CHRISSY321 here on a quick review so I don't completely bring shame upon myself for review day! XD *Happy review day!!!!* :D (extra happy because it is also ...
Nov 29, 2015 -
Re: NOVEL : Mohit--The Person Who Changed Me * Chapter 1*
Hey Eros! CHRISSY321 here with a super quick thought I love this, but I think the only thing that weird to me was the title. It fits, trust me, but ...
Nov 11, 2015 -
Re: 10 reasons why Nate is afraid of YWSers
Hey Sunny! This was amazing. I have been reading a few of these and they are very amusing. I love that you choose YWSers. This is too funny, and I ...
Oct 19, 2015 -
Re: Falling
Hey MergSword! CHRISSY321 here with a review! *This will be #100* ( @steampowered is making me XD ) ;) Okay, so one thing is I like how you had the ...
Oct 4, 2015 -
Re: Before Beauty-chapter #3
Hey! CHRISSY321 here with a review!!! *Happy review day!!!* :D :D :D Okay, so I will be honest, I have not read any parts or chapters before this so I ...
Sep 27, 2015
