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Rin321

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Butterfly Loses Its Wings

    Hi! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy Review day!* This was beautiful! So sad! I feel bad for this girl- but I can relate! It is sad that she can ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Humor Re: I Hate Bugs

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    Hey! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy Review day!* Ok, I just want to start with this- I am on you side! I hate bugs! I think that only I ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Humor Re: I Hate Bugs

    Hey! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy Review day!* Ok, I just want to start with this- I am on you side! I hate bugs! I think that only I ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Angel tears- Chapter 1

    Hello! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy Review day* Ok, first off, I think that the idea for the book is great! Very creative! Ok, now for some editing... In ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: clock!radio

    Hey! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy Review day* Ok, Just want to say one thing most importantly- this so so creative! We all live with this burden- the clock. ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: With Him

    Hey! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy Review day!* Ok, for starters, this is very deep! There are so many parts to this, and it is great! There is so ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I am Free

    Hey! CHRISSY here for a review! *Happy Review day* Ok, I just want to start with a astounding WOW! This is so deep so creative- so hard to write! You ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: Part 1: Terrible Gentleness

    Hey! CHRISSY here with a review! *Happy Review day* Ok, I just wanted to say some things about this. First the many positives! I love the detail in the beginning! ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Gasoline

    Hey! CHRISSY here for a review! This was, very interesting, especially for when you were saying you were using 'opium' and big drug the Chinese loved, and caused a war! ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Never a tomorrow.

    Hey, CHRISSY here with a review! This is beautiful! I will admit that this tok some mad skills! YAY! OK, just want to let you know, that it must have ...

    Jan 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Fowl Meets Potter (Chapter 1)

    Hi Cat! CHRISSY here for some feedback! Ok, well I will be honest-it is interesting... It may just be me, but I feel it would not be easy for readers, ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Invisible

    Congrats Jasmine! ;) I feel that this can have solo many layers! Great job too because you only just joined yesterday! Extra points for that! Ok, now for some changes... ...

    Jan 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Hidden Star

    This is a great story! A little short though, I think that the idea is so great! I think that you should write more. Ok, and now for some more. ...

    Jan 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: The Native Man's Curse

    Great job my friend! I try to pay attention is SS, never mind write a poem about it! My hat id off to you! *takes off hat* Ok, now with ...

    Jan 21, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: ABC's for Writers!

    Hey! CHRISSY here for a review! Ok, here we go... I think this is soooo original! I love how you put yourself into it! You added things about your self, ...

    Jan 19, 2015


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