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Hello! Rin321 back to review some more chapters :) Happy Review Day! I'm starting not at the beginning but there are several chapters here from you that deserve love so ...

Hello! Rin321 here to do a review for this chapter :) Happy Review Day! So I have not read any other chapters, but I saw this work has been un-reviewed ...

Hello! Rin321 here to review this chapter! So first off, I'm reviewing this with no prior knowledge of this storyline, but this cha[ter and the character interactions are really amusing! ...

Hello! Rin321 here to review; Happy review day! Okay, so this poem is very interesting to say the least, haha. I'm right to assume the narrator is ice cream, right? ...

Hello! Rin321 here to review your short story! Happy Review day! One thing I want to point out is your formatting: In the first paragraph, that large paragraph should be ...

Hey, Rin321 here to leave a review; happy review day! Can I just say, wow.... I cannot even imagine. Can I just say how amazed I am that you're even ...

Hello! Rin321 here to review, happy review day! Okie dokie, right to it: I love the way you describe characters so clearly. This a chapter of an ongoing story, obviously, ...

Hello! Rin here to review this amazingly written poem (seriously, wow!) First off, I just want to say how beautiful this is. There are so many ways to go about ...

Hello! Rin here to review this amazing poem! Can I just tell you that this poem really hit me deep? Like friendships between a boy and a girl are always ...

Hello! Rin here to review your amazing poem! To start off, I had never knew there was an actual term for someone who loves the rain, so I guess you ...

Hello! This story really seems interesting I love your style of writing, along with its descriptions, but there are some instances where your sentences get a little bogged down and ...

Hello! It's been a long while since I've been active on this site and done a review but I wanted to take a crack at it and dust off the ...

Hey Keepwriting! CHRISSY321 here to review your little clever poem. (: I saw this when it was first posted, and then I was like "I got to check this out!" ...

Hey Rosepetal8965! You 'ol pal CHRISSY321 here to review your story! You posted it! I remember you telling me this (or reading it to me anyway) SO all I have ...

Hello Felistia! CHRISSY321 here with a review as promised! I have been really late to the party with reviewing this! It seems like everything has been said to correct it, ...