ReyaMedrek

yea, sadly if only love would be just a little bit easier.

yeah that would be alot better than the other two

you definetly should

How about for "Would never need to blink again." why don't you put "would never have the need for glasses"? But thats just a minor suggestion because most of my ...

Heehees, :) great minds think alike

Oh well, your welcome and I want to learn Russian maybe you could teach me :)

Oh kay I guess I never really thought about it that way. thanks

This was really good and I look forward to the second of this story. How did come up with the names for your characters? Everytime I read the name Innusha ...

What if you call this "Warrioress Of Tyraennian"? Would that be a good enough title? Also you should definetly write a part two because this was really good.

This was really good & its better than an poem I've ever written but then again I only write arostics. You should keep writting poems

As I read this my mind painted the most beautiful picture I have ever seen andI just wanted you to know you stood smack in the center of it all.

Why try to hide the things that once brought you comfort before? Mine are still red & will continue to be, but I carry them proudly like battle scars.

this was really good

thanks I'll see if I can happy holidays to you too.

I thank you for your honest opinion my teacher also says my stories are great and that I make most of my mistakes by the commas or the wrong wording, ...