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Re: Our Last Hope (must read first review for it to make sence)
Hey ShadowSoldier! What to say here...I don't know how to say this. All I can suggests is listen to what other people are saying and take it on. I have ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: La Guerra Di Ferruzzano
Hey TheBigCheese! R.O.C. here again to comment on your work! The first thing I noticed when I began reading this piece was "This person must know his Italian culture". I ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: The Angel - Rated 18+ (STRICTLY!!!!!!!!!)
Hey there TheBigCheese! I'm the RepublicOfCoter but people tend to call me R.O.C.! I'll be reviewing you piece today! Now, this poem was.........different. I've never read one like it before. ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: The Nature Of Art
Goodmornin' Cap'n! RepublicOfCoter reportin' for duty! Now, what to say about the haiku... I understand that this is your first haiku? You've done very well! It was written differently to ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: The Time Rift
Greetings ShaddowSoldier or may I call you SS? Wait! I take that back, I should never had mentioned that...well, I'm the RepublicOfCoter but people generally call me R.O.C. *offers hand ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: A day paridise....
Hey there lightningbolt! I'm the RepublicOfCoter but people just call me R.O.C. *offers hand out*. I do hope that you enjoy your time here on YWS and that you post ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Feel No Evil
Hey Warrior Princess! I'm RepublicOfCoter (R.O.C.) and I will be reviewing you dramatic poem today! I thought it was excellent. Simple amazing! I loved how you kept the length consistent ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Way Out
Hey kingolions! I'm not sure what to say...I'm still wiping the tears from my eyes (there is none actually, but I am holding them back). This was by far, the ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: The Truman Show (movie)
Hey rainbowbubble! I'm RepublicOfCoter (R.O.C.) and I will be reviewing your poem today. Before I begin, welcome to The Young Writers Society (YWS)! It is always great to see some ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: My Spot For You
Hey kingolions! I liked this poem! It was a bit different to some of your previous works so you are extending your ideas *pats on the back and hands a ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Until The Day I Die
Hey kingolions! I'm not quite sure if I liked this one? To me, it was that tad bit too cliche for me; you've written some poems of the sort before ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: What's In My Mind
Hey kingolions! What sort of place do I live in where there are no rubbish bins and nothing can burn? It's hell, I say so! Jokes. See? I always have ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Glass
Hey kingolions! I'm trying to find a rubbish bin but I can't find one! Jokes. I know, it must be getting annoying hearing these lame jokes at the beginning of ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: A Single Bullet
Hey kingolions! I'm trying to burn it but the lighter wont work *gets frustrated*. Nah I'm just kidding. I liked this poem. I love the simplicity of it all. And ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: My Teacher
Hey CaptianRandom! I'm sorry. I'm still laughing. I know you don't like this teacher but throughout the entire "poem", I was constantly laughing! It is hilarious! I do have to ...
Sep 22, 2010
