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Wow. There are only a few errors, which are just the ones the the previous reply-ers have mentioned, and it flows quite well. I really like this, the atmosphere seems ...

This was pretty cool, I like it. Other than a few rythym complications (which mosst everybody else has already told you about in earlier posts) I think it was relitively ...

You reveiwed my work so I'm returning the favor- and in this case I think I drew the longer stick. This is, woah... Woah... I don't think I can sum ...

Oh my god, this is really sweet and I couldn't help but be touched by the eloquency and the endearing qualities of this piece. I loved this. You have an ...

Okay this was quite possibly one of the funniest things I've seen on this site! I loved this so much, especially since I am writing a story centering Death. This ...

This was really really good. :) and I liked the plot. Maybe a few more details about the character's past and how he became a hitman for hire? I still ...

This was really sweet, and I loved the title. The title, knowing it, made the poem even better. The changes you made to it (as far as I can tell ...

Woah. That's really all I could say in response to this. I would copy and paste all the compelling or heart-wrenching paragraphs or images but I'd be retelling your entire ...

Woah. That was really awesome, and the bombshell of an ending really caught me off guard but it seemed like it suited the plot extremely well. Other than a few ...

You are such a fan-freaking-tastic writer! I love this! Dark, thrilling, basically everything I wish I could write myself. You are so good, I love this story. Arian was awesome, ...

Oh my god, this is one of the greatest works of literature on this site that I've read.... I loved this so much! It was moving, emotional, and heartwrenching without ...

He was looking, searching for her. His obsession with her was to the point of terrifing (period) She crouched down lower into the darkness against the old pine. It was ...

This is quite possibly one of the greatest things written of all time! I love this so much! I couldn't think of anything you could do to make this any ...

You died on me tonight, you worthless piece of shit. I thought this started the poem really well, although I will admit that it didn't admit too well with the ...

Okay, the corrections I'm going to make are bolded. By the way this is pretty good, and what makes them even better is that they aren't based on Twilight. So ...