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Renard

You're beauty isn't registering on my scale because I don't have x-ray vision

  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: How to be a Spy

    “Here you go, pumpkin. You deserve this cookie!” - Not the ending I was expecting at all. LOL I really enjoyed reading this work. here are some of the good ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: The Most Exciting-Terrifying-Super-Exstatic-Fun-arific-Ultra-Scary-Adventure

    Hey. I was really psyched to read this going from the title. But once I actually got to the work, I have to say I was a little bit disappointed. ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Okstupid

    I loved the title before I realised the significance. XD Stupid = cupid. Right... so the topic of online dating is not something often seen on here. I was intrigued. ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Chris's Life

    Hello. I really enjoyed the opening of this piece. With all that beeping. Lulz. Joking aside, I thought it was a really strong opening. The dialogue between the characters was ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Penguin at the Bottom

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Right then, I < 3 penguins. And it was the title that caught my attention here. As usual, I wasn't disappointed by what I read from you. A highlight: ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: That Damn Smirk

    -fangirls- Ok, you can have the best review EVA just for using a picture of Ian Somerhalder. < 333 -clears throat- Now for the writing.... :D “That’s it”, you said, ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Dead Date

    heyXD Ok. I was really intrigued by the title. And then it was about vampires. And I must admit. I found it really disappointing. Not only does it lack originality, ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Motionless

    Hey. XD Ok, I have to be honest and say: I have absolutely no clue what this work is on about. It may be a paradox, but I don't understand ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: -

    Heggo Baby. XD Review time again. :) So.... In chapter one, you laid the groundwork for Robert Tarquin being a pretentious arse. Here, he is given the opportunity to shine. ...

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Legions of Paper Dolls

    Hey! XD First off, cool title. :) Now for the review.... 'In the real world...a paper doll has no way to survive.' I have joined these two lines together because ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: A Pandamonium Extravaganza

    -Monium is reviewing- Heggo Harry! I know you are writing this about me, this is lovely. Thank you. -BloodinkSeesFootage reviewing - Hey! XD A theoretical exploration of the mind - ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Writer's Depression

    Ok, this time I LOVE the formatting. It really helps with the expression. To start with, I thought this work was going to be really depressing, however, after reading it, ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Paintball Poetry

    Hey! XD I really really like this work. I find some of the works on here to be really depressing, but this one was really fun and very enjoyable. 'rise ...

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forever light

    Hey! XD For your first poem this is a very interesting subject for you to write about. " Live your day with pride With superiority With forever light " I ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Cranium Clouds

    Good title. Lovin the alliteration. Since this work is quite short, I am going to review it line by line. So... The night spoke little to her - you have ...

    Jan 15, 2014


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom