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Re: How to be a Spy
“Here you go, pumpkin. You deserve this cookie!” - Not the ending I was expecting at all. LOL I really enjoyed reading this work. here are some of the good ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The Most Exciting-Terrifying-Super-Exstatic-Fun-arific-Ultra-Scary-Adventure
Hey. I was really psyched to read this going from the title. But once I actually got to the work, I have to say I was a little bit disappointed. ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Okstupid
I loved the title before I realised the significance. XD Stupid = cupid. Right... so the topic of online dating is not something often seen on here. I was intrigued. ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Chris's Life
Hello. I really enjoyed the opening of this piece. With all that beeping. Lulz. Joking aside, I thought it was a really strong opening. The dialogue between the characters was ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Penguin at the Bottom
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Right then, I < 3 penguins. And it was the title that caught my attention here. As usual, I wasn't disappointed by what I read from you. A highlight: ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: That Damn Smirk
-fangirls- Ok, you can have the best review EVA just for using a picture of Ian Somerhalder. < 333 -clears throat- Now for the writing.... :D “That’s it”, you said, ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: A Dead Date
heyXD Ok. I was really intrigued by the title. And then it was about vampires. And I must admit. I found it really disappointing. Not only does it lack originality, ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: Motionless
Hey. XD Ok, I have to be honest and say: I have absolutely no clue what this work is on about. It may be a paradox, but I don't understand ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: -
Heggo Baby. XD Review time again. :) So.... In chapter one, you laid the groundwork for Robert Tarquin being a pretentious arse. Here, he is given the opportunity to shine. ...
Jan 17, 2014 -
Re: The Legions of Paper Dolls
Hey! XD First off, cool title. :) Now for the review.... 'In the real world...a paper doll has no way to survive.' I have joined these two lines together because ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: A Pandamonium Extravaganza
-Monium is reviewing- Heggo Harry! I know you are writing this about me, this is lovely. Thank you. -BloodinkSeesFootage reviewing - Hey! XD A theoretical exploration of the mind - ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: Writer's Depression
Ok, this time I LOVE the formatting. It really helps with the expression. To start with, I thought this work was going to be really depressing, however, after reading it, ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: Paintball Poetry
Hey! XD I really really like this work. I find some of the works on here to be really depressing, but this one was really fun and very enjoyable. 'rise ...
Jan 16, 2014 -
Re: Forever light
Hey! XD For your first poem this is a very interesting subject for you to write about. " Live your day with pride With superiority With forever light " I ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Cranium Clouds
Good title. Lovin the alliteration. Since this work is quite short, I am going to review it line by line. So... The night spoke little to her - you have ...
Jan 15, 2014
