Renard

Hey! XD So, I assume the omission of capital letters at the start of each line here is deliberate? Because you have done it consistently, I think that is so. ...

Hey! XD The ideas you have here are great. Albeit, a little twisted. The notion of setting this kind of work to that tune was actually rather humourous (that might ...

Heyo sexy! Me for da review. So… I know the background behind this project, and since this is the first instalment, it’s only going to get better. ‘Dominatrix.’ ‘RAWR! CRACK! ...

HellO! This is the most insightful thing I've read all the time I've been on YWS about NOT committing some act of self harm. You've got it exactly here: Blades ...

Hey! Reviewing as requested. I have done this line by line and then with a general summary overall. Days are passing by They are gone to soon – you have ...

Hey! This is very appropriate for Valentine's Day. So... WWW: - I like the repetition of the word 'To' at the beginning of the lines - Your ideas are lovely ...

Hey! You have some really solid concepts here. Good characterisation, pacing and interaction. You don't need to remind the audience every time of the curly hair and green eyes thing, ...

Hey! XD This is a good work. :) There are lots of good metaphors and lines in this piece: 'So they lie when they say a Nightmare can't hurt you, ...

Hey! This is a very thoughtful essay that deals with an important topic. You have cited your references well. You open conversationally and provide an anecdote which helps the reader ...

Hey! XD I was expecting something very 'country' from this judging by the write up. And you started off to my expectations: 'The echo tolled, deaf'nin'' But after that, you ...

Hegggggggggggggggggggo! XD Fiancee here to review da work. :) So... 'We'll dance to the backdrop Of a thousand skinned bodies' #icky imagery. XD No, I really like the way you ...

Hey! I really like the imagery surrounding this work. Also, it's really cool that your subject matter matches your username XD However, you seriously need some midline punctuation in these ...

Hey! This work is really hard to get hold of. Partly because of its brevity, but also because of the language used. Um... Artificiality in itself is a big word ...

Hey! This is a very introspective work. To be honest, it is kind of hard to follow. The grammar and punctuation at the opening is a little bit sketchy: 'It’s… ...

Hey! So this work is really funny. I don't really understand why it is in bullet points? Was this a formatting issue or a conscious choice? Because it seems a ...