Renard

Hey! XD PLEASE STOP WITH THE SPAM! I notice whenever I review one of these works, that the person who created it never replies. So, 'MedX Corporation, based in Ocala, ...

Hey! XD You've got something really clever going on here, and I know that, because I can't really understand it. :P I have to work at it to derive meaning, ...

Hey baby! XD Sooooo 'I shouldn’t even be here today. Not after waking up at 1:30 in the morning and realising, “yes, you did just a Freudian nightmare from Hell, ...

Hey! XD Firstly, I wish you had used punctuation in this poem, because it would have made it a lot easier and enjoyable to read. 'I break a dream at ...

Hey! XD I have never seen someone put the word 'psycho' with a question mark before. 'The narrator says, “The disease had sharpened my senses — not destroyed -- not ...

Hey! XD I think the formatting has gone dodgy in this piece, because there is no spacing. So I won't pick on that don't worry. I like what you've written ...

Hey! XD Alright, once again i will start with the nitpicks. Why have you only used punctuation in half of the piece? The first part is missing: This is your ...

Hey! XD Love what you're doing with this piece. However, there are WAY too many rhetorical questions in your opening paragrpah. You have gone completely overkill. XD 'Do you want ...

hey!XD I should really have reviewed this considering I have read it and loved it and asked you questions about it. XD So here we are: i love what you've ...

Hey I take it you have written a work about yourself? I am getting really fed up with these spam things that have no explanation. The writing is ok, the ...

Hey! Nic premise, but you reall need some more punctuation and organisational structure to this piece. It is stopping it from being as good as it could be because there ...

Hey! i won't pick on the formatting, as you've mentioned the reason, although personally I don't think it's that bad. it doesn't affect the reading of the work and that's ...

Hey Alright, well at least you're acknowledging now that the majority of your works are miserable and depressing as hell. 'Death would be wonderful, great. A vacation of peace, away ...

Hey! So this is a realllllllllllllllly long work. XD Took me ages to read through it all, and I have to be honest, it was a little bit long drawn ...

Hey So this is a very angry poem. 'your fucked up version of ‘daddy’s little girl’ is a lie.' to say the least. I am glad you rated it as ...