Okay, so I shall now review the spam as best as I can.
Well, you've got your facts straight. This is a nicely detailed article/essay, with all the information one would need on this Keith Orie. You do a good job of writing about yourself without putting too much focus on yourself. What I mean to say is: you write this like someone else is writing it. It's not narcissistic, nor do you uphold yourself in some sort of light. You made sure you were detached, and that's good.
This was hard to get into, but isn't all articles/essays? You did good with providing information that was too the point and clear and simple.
I do think you ended this a bit abruptly and could've done more to make the ending transition more. Perhaps end it with a question or something to make the reader sit there and think for a bit. But other than that, this was a good essay/article/what-have-you.
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