Renard

So I saw this and Lolled. It's really quite poignant. 'I am dashing I am brave! All the damsels I will save. With mighty sword in hand, I liberate all ...

Heyooooo You have created more for me to review. :D YAY Stephen, rebellious as ever, has unbuttoned his school shirt to reveal a V neck t-shirt, which hints at a ...

Heyo. This chapter is really really short. it is more like an excerpt. And I know we have discussed this and you are going to add more words. :) 'After ...

Heggo again. The tone of this chapter is really ironic: "Crying is for pussies." hee hee One of the things I like most about this piece is the ability is ...

YO! Firstly, love the title for this chapter. hee hee. XD Opening with the lines you do, not only builds character, but reminds the reader exactly the type of person ...

heggo. So I owe you quite a few reviews. XD *gulps* I thought I had better get started. There are loads of good points about this chapter: 1. character development ...

Hey! XD So this is very basically written. You get off to a good start with the dialogue, but you really need to work on your description. This piece has ...

Hey! XD And welcome to YWS. So this is your first work; and it’s all about a very deep and meaningful subject. I like the opening line: “LOVE, a simple ...

Hey! XD This was great hard to read because of the formatting, and also because I quickly realised that this was going to be very depressing. Aside from that I ...

I recognise the title of this. You are a F.O.B fan right? :) Now for the actual poem... 'My sister and I fought dragons; took on beast with blade and ...

Hey! XD So this work has an interesting title, that progresses into an interesting work too. :) However, the punctuation here is all over the place. Now, you have used ...

Hey! XD I love your opening line :) I’m lost…Like always, I find my way. However, I feel like it contradicts slightly with the next line. I was lost. For ...

hey! XD You have a really distinctive writing style and I love it. 'I'm blind to all evil. I forgot what it was, and I was only finally awakened when ...

Hey baby! XD Here for a review as promised. So. The title is very *you* and you know that. ;) Is it really that relevant to the work? *shrug* But ...

Hey! XD First off, typo: 'enthralled' not 'in' Second off: great writing voice :) These lines for example: 'Fleet players dodge cramped bleachers Full of fans who scream I wonder ...