Renard

Hey I can see that this is a collaborative short story, the weird thing is, is that it looks more like a script, the way it is set out. That's ...

Heyo So the structure of this piece is very interesting. When you read the first lines, it looks as though you are going to follow quite a neat, repetitive structure: ...

So first off, you have been saying your readers might like this. And now that I have read it... I can see why. :) Then again, this is the same ...

Heyo This is an interesting title for an interesting work. What catches my attention most about it, is the fact that it is structured in a very unique way. It ...

Heyo. So this is a very emotional work. I wonder what inspired it. 'Sweet girl, Sweet baby, please don't cry,' the opening creates a large sense of empathy for the ...

Oooh. I have never seen a work like this before, I just sat back and watched it type away. How did you do it? XD However, I must say I ...

Hegggggggggo...... review time! You said yourself that this work was miserable, but I don't actually think that when I look at it. 'Nausea' is a pretty icky title, but it ...

Heyo Well for something you just knocked out, you've got a really powerful piece on your hands here. And it certainly didn't offend or disturb me in any way, don't ...

heyo At first, I wouldn't really be sure how to categorise this work, but I guess it says it right that it's a short story. Even though it;s meant to ...

Heyo I reviewed this after mistaking the title. But it was a happy mistake. 'OOC: All right, I know this is a really lousy ending to a book. But, my ...

Heyo so this work is very philosophcal in a way. The title cuaght my attention and i was not disappointed by what I read here. 'I'm on the flip side ...

Hello I love the dedication at the beginning of the work it is so sweet. Now for the work itself. Firstly, it's very long, which isn't necessarily bad, but I ...

Hey! XD This work is very philosophical and I like this because it's really relevant to me at the moment, what with studying for my exams an all. :D You're ...

Hey! I thought this work was very dramatic. 'When you do I can see your fear.' I have chosen to comment on this line, because I feel it is also ...

So at first, I wasn't sure whether this was a work you had written or some sort of Biblical excerpt. It blurs the lines between fact and fiction and that ...