Renard

You wrote a work! Yayayayaya! *hugs* 'Post Traumatic Bake Disorder...' You are just a genius! This must have been the poem you told me about waking up to write. I ...

You've got a very punctuated title. And that sturdy set up continues throughout the poem. The rigid style in which the stanzas are composed also conforms to the "neatness" of ...

Hello! Harsh title, but I do lke the way this is written. To start, I thought the change in font was due to a technical error, but then I came ...

Hello hunny. Worrying title, but at least I know what is really going to happen (because you already know me and have told me.) 'This is most probably it.' This ...

Hello. Ok well, it definitely wasn't what I thought given the title. (Good job you explained that.) 'There she goes again. Mumbling, grumbling and howling in pain' Although the opening ...

Hello. So this was freshly written today. Hmm. I don't know what to make of this work. It's interesting but really short. Almost too short. 'The red lipstick was a ...

Hee hee. Only you could come up with an experimental work like this! XD I am impressed. I like the way the two types of letters have been personified here. ...

Hello. I get the feeling this is an experimental work? Although I'm not sure. and so many insects – clicking, chirping, jumping You've got good control over language and structure ...

Hello. I don't like this poem. It's not written badly, I just disagree with the content. Being a Disney fan I suppose doesn't help, because when I think of the ...

Oooh. This is interesting. It's great that you're experimenting with new types of structure. And I'm glad you've provided the link to explain what it means, otherwise I would have ...

Hello. I've noticed a trend with your works in the deliberate lack of capital letters. I am starting to think it is deliberate. Your opening lines are very thought inspiring: ...

Hey. I agree with the comments made in the previous review. I didn't know about this, so you have educated me. But I don't think that was the purpose of ...

Hey. On the whole, I find this work to be rather childish. Which is a shame, because it had the potential to be really good. It's interesting the way you ...

Hey. Bold title. And the work was not what I was expecting. Clearly this has been well thought out as it was written which you can tell from the organisational ...

First of all, you will be pleased to know that this work does make sense. I like the way open with the voices of the characters in the piece - ...