Renard

Hello! :D I am here to review your lovely work and it's shorty short short! :D YAY. Coolio. When men are not great anymore, and tired and lazy, They assemble ...

Hello. :D The first thing I noticed about this work was that it was very segmented. Maybe it's that way because of the word count you've got to meet and ...

Hello. This comes across as one of the traditional vampire kind of stories or something. And I can't say why. maybe it's your avvie? XD You have good dialogue: I ...

Hello! This reminds me of the old Shakespeare quote about the whole world being a stage. Or at least, in the way it starts. What Went Well 1. The good ...

Hello. I don't think i've read one of your works. So here we go. What Went Well 1. The writing was interesting and not too long, so the length as ...

Hello. Your poem really offended me! JOKING! No, in actual fact, I admire you for tackling such subject content. :) So... Play the song, Johnny. Blast it through, The stereo. ...

Heyo again! I can't believe you used my name and I didn't review this work. XD Ha ha. Here we go: I paint the canvas red It reflects the colour ...

Hello. I have to say I don't understand the meaning or the significance of the title of this work. Strangely, it was that very thing that drew me to reading ...

Hello. So this is basically about rebellion. From the perspective of this guy: The name is Chad, the name is Chad Who seems very preoccupied about being recognised by his ...

Hello. Hmm. I think this one of those poems that has more significance to it than you first think. For example, this isn't reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly about a jumper is it? :P ...

Hello! Ha ha. When I first read the description of this, I got confused and I thought you meant the two brothers were in love. Now THAT would have been ...

Hello. I am here to review this poem. So here we go: What Went Well 1. The length of the overall piece, said all you needed to say 2. Enjambment ...

Hello. A perfect short work. And one this is incidentally, incredibly hard to review. It's interesting that you chose to put the sentence in italics. That adds a very dream-like ...

D'aww. This is a very sweet poem. It's very even and neat and sweet. You're writing to your mom about you mom and it's all lovely. Obviously, this is a ...

Awww. I really like the way you've written this. Also, it's lovely that it's in memory of some people, that makes it seem so much more visceral and real. And ...