Remington38

Hello Remington38 here! The repetition is very effective in this lyrical narrative. Overall this was written very well and the emotions fill the poem. We question many things and I ...

Hello. A lot of what I want to say is already said by other amazing members. The amazing imagery and details I am willing to restate on though. I can ...

Wow... Just wow. This was beautifully written and I have no words to describe how much I love this. Slowly I have been reading more and more poetry for this ...

Remington38 here! I found this satirical poem very entertaining. The description and imagery in the poem is written very well which is good because I feel those are very important ...

Hello, Like the wiser members above I agree that I like briefness of this poem and how it covers everything without stretching it out or overdoing it. The only thing ...

Hello Remington38 here. I found this very informative which is very important for writers because if you do something do it right! Espeshally with situations of crime scene in writing ...

Hello Remington38 for a review. *rawr* I absolutely loved this story, it was dark and short but had so much meaning. The way it was the child's thought process but ...

Hello I'm Remington38, Let's start off with welcome to YWS! You are really going to like it here I know I do and I am sorta still new here too. ...

Hello this is Remington38 for a review. I found this story so interesting and eye catching and the ending heart wrenching. Honestly this was genious and so well written. At ...

Hello I'm Remington38!!! This story was a mix of a lot of different things where there was some comical parts there was also deep meanings intertwined. I found this story ...

Hello Remington38 for a review! I really enjoyed reading this story, it caught and kept my interests. All though it sort of felt incomplete an could have used some more ...

Hello Remington38 here *rawr* This I found so cute and it just made me smile, works like this are what make me appreciate poetry. I almost was hoping for more ...

Hello Remington38, This was great and I really enjoyed reading it. I'm actually glad you didn't include any English base examples because unless you're talking about formatting or things like ...

Hello I'm Remington38 and have a review! I really enjoyed the story so far and feel it has a lot of potential. The characters so far and just the idea ...

Let's see if I can come anywhere near describing how I felt about this. Absolutely amazing and completely relatable. You've molded imagery and characters than in poem can only be ...