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Re: Home
Hello Remington38 here for a review! I agree with the reviewer beneath that the imagery is stunning. This is written so poetically and so elegantly. This is amazing and the ...
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Re: Hanging By A Thread
Remington38 here for a review! I really enjoyed reading this poem and really liked the idea. Just from the title it caught my attention and I had a feeling I ...
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Re: Children
Remington38 here for a reveiw! This was pretty good but I feel like it's missing something and it doesn't connect to the reader enough. The first part connects but I ...
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Re: In the Eyes of a Demon
Remington38 here for a review! This was really cool and written really well. There really isn't anything I would fix or change. The description is really good and I really ...
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Re: More Than Fiction
Hey Remington38 here for a review. Wow. That is all I can say that is probably going to make sense. This was written so beautifully and elegantly. The way you ...
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Re: Covenant
Hello Remington38 here for a review! I really liked this poem like a lot of what you have written. The description is stunning in this poem and I love how ...
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Re: Lies and Deceit- Chapter 1 *Edited*
Hello this is Remington38 here for a review! Wow! The description in this written so well. I could see all of this playing out in my head perfectly. I have ...
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Re: A Thousand Words
Remington38 here for a review! Welcome to YWS! I honestly have nothing to say that I would like to see more of or fix. This was really good and written ...
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Re: Beautiful
Hello Remington38 here! Welcome to YWS! I found this poem very interesting in the idea and how it goes s written out. I loved it and how elegantly it was ...
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Re: Ghost Dialogue
Hello Remington38 here for a review, So I would like to start off with saying how interesting this was. A very interesting idea and I would love to the rest ...
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Re: The Laws of Aviation
Hello Remington38 here! This was a very interesting idea and topic. Very creative way of looking at things. The only thing is the formatting was very confusing. There was no ...
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Re: Done
Hello Remington38 here!!! This is a very lonely piece and shows a lot of emotion but what's not lonely is being the one to feel this. This is very relatable ...
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Re: tampons and stretch marks
Hello this is Remington38, I would just like to start by simply stating I love your confidence and almost envy it. This is something I feel every girl should read ...
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Re: Forget Me
Hello Remington38 here for a review, This is very well written and the only thing I would recommend is taking a look at the grammar. I don't know much about ...
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Re: Ukel
Hello! This piece was ver well written and I found it really funny. I envy writers with your capabilities for writing funny things. I love all of the references in ...
Jun 5, 2016
