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I can sign on and I use AOL. Anyway, this is an amusing joke, and could apply to any politicians that are hated by a lot of people. Doesn't really ...

Yes, it is deceptively simple. It's easy to understand, and has some wonderful feelings behind it. This poem had the same effect on me as the painting had on the ...

Yeah, that last line is no good. And so what if it's a cliche or not. That's not the problem with this poem. The problem is that it seems very ...

I wouldn't say there's too much dialogue. But rather, there is not enough narrative details. You know, like visual descriptions, physical action, and the like. My comments on your other ...

Thanks. In the next chapter is where we properly understand why she is the way she is, and what started the bullying in the first place.

I entered this into a monologue-writing contest. What do you think my chances are?

Yeah, the word grey is overused, but I liked it. Didn't seem too mushy. The tone was just right, and so was the length. The character was strong and I ...

Pretty darn good. Got my attention right away. Style is unique, and works really well. I love the sentence fragments. Really makes it feel like you're inside the character's head.

GAH! Take a look at your second paragraph, and then I refer you to the Dialogue grammar topic.

Would you mind telling us a little bit about these books? This, after all, the book review forum.

Some pretty ideas, but like scintillation said, I thought there was something missing. Maybe you could include some of your own perspecives on what beauty is instead of just questioning ...

What they said. Interesting choice in metephore. It was used really well. That stuff usually goes right over my head, but I understood this just fine.

This doesn't make any sence to me at all. I read it four times and can't tell what it's about. I recommend the KISS method. Keep It Simple Stupid. Use ...

Thanks guys. The painting I describe is a real painting in my room. I actually came up with this one day while I was just sitting on my bed, staring ...

Parump sounds like a fantastic name for a pig.