Razcoon

Hey, Girl. How are you doing? I'm okay. I really miss you, though In every way This distance between us, stretch for miles I would walk a thousand just to ...

Unconditionally, I'll stay here by your side. That's what you told me Then, you baried me alive buried Why did you do it I thought I was your friend But ...

I absolutely love this! :D But one nitpick: I do know of another website that does this, but it's based in the USA rather than in Europe. I used to ...

I have to say, I can't take this poem seriously when it keeps saying "yeah" and "honey" every other line and says things like "it was a lot less slutty". ...

The vampire feeds on the redness of my apples. This reminds me of myself in so many ways... (Pale, sometimes called a vampire, and LOVES APPLES.) Canned doughnuts feed the ...

I love it. This isn't much of a review, but it's also not "this is good because I liked it", and I will state actual reasons. 1. Dark humor = ...

MissMadHatter, at first glance I thought you were critiquing your own piece! xD Anyway, TheMadHatter, I really like this little piece here! It reminds me of those little written bits ...

Harry and Edward came face to face in the forbidden forest. "What are you doing here?" said Harry . "What does it look like I'm doing ? I'm taking Bella ...

This is not a smart thing to post here. While your spelling and grammar were perfect as far as I can see, and your sentence structure was great, Error404 is ...

At first this looked harmless, but a lot of the things you said were over the top and, quite frankly, insulting. Rude. Now I'm not a guy myself, and don't ...

I think you could easily catch on what I'm doing here. I struck the match. I struck out. But your flame so bright, compeled me to strike again. [compelled] And ...

I have to be honest here - I see no point in this poem. It's just a WALL of words, no stanzas, no flow, and no real focus I was ...

Ladypurple got most of the nitpicks I was going to point out, but I have one more thing to add. falling deeper and deeper in this despair Don't forget to ...

I apologise if this seems a little redundant after Vern's (LastPaladin) review, but this seems very cliche and kind of whiny. You're basically saying the same thing over and over; ...

I will do a normal review: Blue for comments, and red for corrections. --------------------------------------------------------------------- I saw eternal love in your eyes I saw the everlasting purit