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RavenBlack

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: Macbeth

    Hi @4revgreen , Rav3nB1ack here! Literally just saw Macbeth and immediately clicked it because I remembered that I loved to study that book when I was in school! It's such ...

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Tree Personalities

    Hey @HiddenMask, Rav3nB1ack here! I just want to say...I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! IT'S SO UNIQUE! IT'S SO DIFFERENT AND SUCH REFRESHING READ! (so for the all caps, I'm just ...

    Mar 17, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Chapter 1- She belongs to the moon

    Hi @kostia , Rav3nB1ack here! This was an interesting read and I was very curious with the concept that you presented in this chapter. I reviewed this as I went ...

    Mar 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Gay Short Story

    Hi @Noobwriter88 , Rav3nB1ack here! This was a sweet short story! I couldn't help but smile when Adrian asked Cody out! I was so worried that the note he left ...

    Mar 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Thought it was life....

    Hi @Theia Rav3nB1ack here! This was a very intriguing piece of poetry, it has such a complex and metaphorical narrative that it made me wonder if there was more to ...

    Mar 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Strong

    Hi @FireSpyGirl , Rav3nB1ack here! First of, I have to say that I'm sorry that you're going through what you're going through and even though you don't feel strong right ...

    Feb 13, 2019
  • Article / Essay » General, Narrative Re: Of Hawks & Of Humans

    Hi @Featherstone , Rav3nB1ack here! I've got a background in English Literature, so I hope my feedback helps in one way or another :) - The first thing that stood ...

    Jan 29, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural Re: State to State - 2.1

    Hi @LadyBird , Rav3nB1ack here! This was an enjoyable read, the humour was well timed and stuck to the characteristics of Sherlock that I'm familiar too (I've only watched the ...

    Jan 29, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Opps, I Added too much Pepper

    Hi @Horisun , Rav3nB1ack here! This definitely was a different type of poetry that I'm accustomed too and that's a good thing! Studying English Lit and reading very serious poems ...

    Jan 25, 2019
  • Other » Romantic, Theatre Re: the day i fell in love (or, rather, the night)

    Hi @Sakura , Rav3nB1ack here! This was a really beautiful and well written piece about what to me felt like was a self-confession of someone who's in love with someone ...

    Jan 25, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Summoning Persephone - Chapter 12

    Hi @Dreamworx95, Rav3nB1ack here! Thank you for the quick summary and giving prior context to the chapter and I hope when you publish this novel it goes well! I'm going ...

    Jan 17, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Luminous: Cicadas (Chap 1)

    Hi @AlyTheBookworm, Rav3nB1ack here! This is so well rewritten and your description is so good, like REALLY good. Here's some key things I liked. - I love the description of ...

    Jan 13, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: A New Ally - The Creature Inside Chapter 3

    Hi, Rav3nB1ack here! I'm going to review this as I go along :) - I love the use of short sentences in the second paragraph, it really build the paces ...

    Jan 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Three: The Dark Prince

    Hey @IvoryRose, RavenBlack here! Positives: - I really like the character of the Dark Prince, he's derisive and cocky personality is such a contrast to the behaviour of a stereotypical ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Girl of my dream

    Hi! RavenBlack here! I'm going to comment on this verse by verse if that's alright :) V1 - I like the use of the simile, 'her eyes like lapis', it ...

    Dec 16, 2018


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