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Re: everyone's born to be deranged
I love how committed this poem is to using the human body to show pain. The narrator is so self-aware, which makes lines like "i am to blame for my ...
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Re: Assault (SA)
Breezy, you are strong. You are everything that person tried to take from you, and nothing in what you experienced diminishes who you are or what you deserve. Your poem ...
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Re: A Sky Full of Stars
I appreciate this poem, Lovely, because it feels like more than a simple expression of affection and instead makes a layered portrayal of love that feels both intentional and reciprocal. ...
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Re: Grey
Hello Amauster, I found myself returning to your passage more than once, each reading settling in me more deeply than the last. There is something about it that feels personal, ...
Apr 30 -
Re: Story Prompt #1
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I find that I enjoy this method! Maybe it will help me write more reviews! Top Graham Cracker - First ...
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Re: Under Scarlet Waves
Analysis The poem begins with the narrator already underwater and confused. Lines like How did I get here? and Was it me, or was it he? make it clear that ...
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Re: Dear April (First Draft)
Analysis Dear April is a letter from a father to his biological daughter who was adopted. It moves through his past mistakes and his interactions with April, blending confession, memory, ...
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Re: Judged
Analysis The poem Judged is about how no matter what you do, people will always find something wrong with it. Every line starts with a question— Should I lose weight? ...
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Re: in this house
In This House Opening lines /this house, as it always has been and will be, is a contaminated space./ Starting with “this house” grounds the poem in a very direct ...
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Re: Stained Rose: Chapter 1 - Part 1
Stained Rose ~ A full analysis and breakdown Overall Thoughts: This piece is atmospheric, thoughtful, and emotionally grounded. The strength lies in how it balances grief with quiet, everyday details,
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Re: chapter one: its a music minefield
I saw a review using this format from @Ravena and I really liked it and wanted to use it but I wasn't sure if I could. If you see this ...
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Re: The Witches and The Boy
Hi Roxanne, I absolutely loved this script. For such a short piece, it grabbed my attention right away and kept me engaged through every line. The humor landed perfectly, and ...
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Re: Our trip to the beach in 2024
Hi Genevieve, It was a pleasure to read your poem! I really liked this poem — it felt both nostalgic and deeply personal. The way it starts with lighthearted images ...
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Re: Darryl Crawford-The trouble of Carlos
This story was wild from beginning to end — in a good way. It starts with such a nostalgic tone, Darryl sneaking out for Trick-or-Treating in 2003 even though his ...
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Re: WITHOUT A HAND TO HOLD
Dear Ippoet, I want to take a moment to reflect on the complexity of our society—how deeply polarized, fragmented, and detached we’ve become. So much so that even events marked ...
Sep 11, 2025
