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The poem has some really strong imagery, especially in the parts with the ticking clock, the endless sheet, and the final bell. Those details make the memory feel much more ...

This poem is such a powerful piece. The way the narrator uses nature to capture their inner world, especially transforming the rain into an actual character is so beautifully done. ...

I enjoyed reading this, it really encapsulates the emotion of yearning just as oddworks wrote. Your descriptioning is great too with likening his eyes to "crystal pearls", his lips to ...

This poem uses its form well to support its message, i really like that. Keeping everything in one stanza sort of makes the friends feel connected even though they live ...

Hi Dystopian it is a pleasure to meet you! George Adams awoke, his head still in the memory that had haunted him for the last 4 years. He hated waking ...

HEYA! We are five years old when we begin to learn the ritual of ballet... Evolution happens, even in a ballet studio. At first I wondered if making this more ...

Hello Plume! I hope everything is well with you! I found your poem on the spotlight and I was intrigued on what sort of writer you were and I know ...

This poem understands something that I find many people do not truly contemplate: love and hurt are often spoken in the same breath. To love someone is to think of ...

I really connected with this piece because it feels so realistic. Young people miss opportunities all the time because of money, pressure from their environment, fear, or the belief that ...

Hello Valkyria, Its been awhile since i reviewed in earnest and one thing I will will always love coming back to is the works of great authors such as yourself! ...

I love how committed this poem is to using the human body to show pain. The narrator is so self-aware, which makes lines like "i am to blame for my ...

Breezy, you are strong. You are everything that person tried to take from you, and nothing in what you experienced diminishes who you are or what you deserve. Your poem ...

I appreciate this poem, Lovely, because it feels like more than a simple expression of affection and instead makes a layered portrayal of love that feels both intentional and reciprocal. ...

Hello Amauster, I found myself returning to your passage more than once, each reading settling in me more deeply than the last. There is something about it that feels personal, ...

Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I find that I enjoy this method! Maybe it will help me write more reviews! Top Graham Cracker - First ...