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Re: By the End of the Day
Hi Dystopian it is a pleasure to meet you! George Adams awoke, his head still in the memory that had haunted him for the last 4 years. He hated waking ...
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Re: The Studio {Prologue}
HEYA! We are five years old when we begin to learn the ritual of ballet... Evolution happens, even in a ballet studio. At first I wondered if making this more ...
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Re: on home becoming my parents' house
Hello Plume! I hope everything is well with you! I found your poem on the spotlight and I was intrigued on what sort of writer you were and I know ...
Aug 5 -
Re: The Weight of a Soul
This poem understands something that I find many people do not truly contemplate: love and hurt are often spoken in the same breath. To love someone is to think of ...
Jul 30 -
Re: I CAN'T GO!
I really connected with this piece because it feels so realistic. Young people miss opportunities all the time because of money, pressure from their environment, fear, or the belief that ...
Jul 27 -
Re: Stained Pages - Part One
Hello Valkyria, Its been awhile since i reviewed in earnest and one thing I will will always love coming back to is the works of great authors such as yourself! ...
Jul 27 -
Re: everyone's born to be deranged
I love how committed this poem is to using the human body to show pain. The narrator is so self-aware, which makes lines like "i am to blame for my ...
Jul 24 -
Re: Assault (SA)
Breezy, you are strong. You are everything that person tried to take from you, and nothing in what you experienced diminishes who you are or what you deserve. Your poem ...
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Re: A Sky Full of Stars
I appreciate this poem, Lovely, because it feels like more than a simple expression of affection and instead makes a layered portrayal of love that feels both intentional and reciprocal. ...
Apr 30 -
Re: Grey
Hello Amauster, I found myself returning to your passage more than once, each reading settling in me more deeply than the last. There is something about it that feels personal, ...
Apr 30 -
Re: Story Prompt #1
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I find that I enjoy this method! Maybe it will help me write more reviews! Top Graham Cracker - First ...
Feb 5 -
Re: Under Scarlet Waves
Analysis The poem begins with the narrator already underwater and confused. Lines like How did I get here? and Was it me, or was it he? make it clear that ...
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Re: Dear April (First Draft)
Analysis Dear April is a letter from a father to his biological daughter who was adopted. It moves through his past mistakes and his interactions with April, blending confession, memory, ...
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Re: Judged
Analysis The poem Judged is about how no matter what you do, people will always find something wrong with it. Every line starts with a question— Should I lose weight? ...
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Re: in this house
In This House Opening lines /this house, as it always has been and will be, is a contaminated space./ Starting with “this house” grounds the poem in a very direct ...
Oct 3, 2025
