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Thank you guys :)

Wow I wasn't fully expecting that ending. This piece is very moving. Awesome job. :)

To me it seemed to be mostly realistic fiction besides the whole Love is a disease and the society is government based and limited to what they can do. The ...

Thank you guys so much. I'll work on the corrections and put the edited version up soon.

No problem, I totally love this story, and I am some what of a nit picker ahaha. :)

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I know what caressing means. I was trying to use it in a personification sort of way. I did not use a thesaurus. I really liked your review. thanks.

I know what caressing means. I was trying to use it in a personification sort of way. I did not use a thesaurus. I really liked your review. thanks.

Thank you :)

thank you I am currently working on chapter 20 the final chapter. Hope itll be up soon :)

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Thank you.