Rascalover

HELLO, First, I wanna say welcome! I see you are a New member. I hope you're following the 2:1 ratio. You know, the ratio that says for every 2 reviews ...

Wow that was alot to take in, but it was really good! Being a twin myself I could never image having lost my brother... with emotions such as jealousy. The ...

We get a really red face. And it looks like she’s in pain too. And screaming. So we get a close-up of a woman, who’s screaming, and whose face is ...

Very original! I liked it, but some parts became to confusing. Wind blew loudly through my hair as I waited paitenly at the corner of the street hoping something, anything ...

Jesse I love you like whoa, so please don't ever go. If you did I would cry, I would drop dead and die, [s]and also I'd feel really low.[/s] I ...

I tell you you're a jerk, But, really make My entire body sped up.. I think maybe the first stanza should be rewritten. Are you trying to say that as ...

Very well written piece of work! :D Even though the ending threw me off a bit it was very good. Keep up the good work. I would love to read ...

Good job! I liked your poem, but some thing threw me off and I can't explain it. i love the message your poem contains and how you convey it so ...

You really wrote this in a dream? Wow thats awesome. I'm quit found of this poem. All of it made sense and good word usage. Although I was thrown off ...

All in all I think this piece could be a little more... I would love to see imagery, some nice pictures being put our heads from the words that should ...

Lynn. Hard. Lynn had a red and print on the side of her face Between hard and lynn there should be a coma instead of a period. She loved seeing ...

This is at very nice lenght. It has a strange, but lovely topic. It caught my attention quite quickly, and I love it. Please capitalize your "I's", but this is ...

First thought: wow I really liked it. Im new here and I haven't read to many of the written works on here, but this is really interesting. it makes me ...