Published July 15, 2008
i dont know what you think but i like this poem. i was proud of the fact that i wrote it in a dream than woke up and wrote it down. tell me what you think.
There should be no such thing as love,
Or such a thing as hate.
I think we should put instinct above,
The search for a soul mate.
Cavemen had no need to date.
Why don’t we just procreate?
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You really wrote this in a dream? Wow thats awesome. I'm quit found of this poem. All of it made sense and good word usage. Although I was thrown off a bit by the cavemen part.
Awesome job!
Hey!!
Interesting poem. I don't necessarily agree with your views but the structure of the poem was good and the words used well. It made sense and you conveyed your ideas well.
Good Job!
I liked it but as I just told you, reviewing poems are not my strong point. You wrote it in a dream? Awesome. I need to look up procreate. I liked it and everything made sense.