RanaNoodles

Hello! This was a really great story! It starts with the narrator (he or she?) so convinced that it’s them (whoever they are) that they’re missing, and it ends with ...

Hi! I loved this poem! I can picture your dog really well; I love the description. I’m a little confused how a dog can have auburn hair, but that might ...

Hi! I love this poem so much! I find it so true and applicable to life. You don’t, in addressing it to your mom, fall back on saying thank you ...

Hello! This was a really great prologue. The description was beautifully written, even though it’s a little gross at parts (especially the rotting deer). You go into whole paragraphs just ...

Hi! I loved this story! It had a really good message to it, and you portrayed it well. You didn’t give a ton of backstory for Gustav, but he still ...

Hi! I really like this poem! It was really dark, but in a good way. I love the title; it was kind of controversial in that generally light in considered ...

Hello! I really like this piece. It got the message across well even without a lot of punctuation or capitalization. Actually, the lack of them made it more powerful. I ...

Hi! I really like this prologue. It got really dark really fast, but for some reason, that worked. It was so short, but it was captivating. You get everything across ...

Hello! This poem is really great! I love you start it really casual, but then it evolves into this powerful poem about less fortunate people. You don’t capitalize the beginning ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. It was powerful, especially in the last few lines. I thought it was just going to be describing the destruction that comes with a ...

Hi! This poem is really awesome. It doesn’t exactly have stanzas, which might have helped to split it up, but it was still an interesting and kind of intriguing choice. ...

Hola! This poem was really beautiful and deep. I can’t tell exactly what’s happening, which might just be me interpreting stuff weirdly, but I think the ambiguity actually worked. It ...

Hi! I really liked this poem. It was split up really well (especially with the little squiggles, which I don't know the name of even though I probably should, haha), ...

Hi! I really like this poem. The way you described everything felt kind of surreal, like when you personified the moon with its 'hands'. It's obviously short, but I feel ...

Hi! This piece is really beautifully written, and also sad. The first few words were intriguing, and I wanted to read more, even though I had already read the title ...