Young Writers Society

:( *cries* That was great Elliott....you should show Alex. It made we almost cry :( XXXXX [Caitlin]

Hmm..this was interesting. I liked it a lot. It was well written, I mean last year when I was that old, I couldn't do a poem this weel written and ...

Hey! I remember this!!! You showed it to me the last Christmas I was at your guys's house. I still like it a lot. And I really wasn't bored by ...

I would definitely have to agree with the previous posts. I didn't catch the metaphor, and nothing really climactic about it, but I really liked it for that reason, I ...

This was awesome! It's like, writer's block described completely. Well, the basis of it. I find that writer's block is not the same for every one, and you seemed to ...

I really liked this. This metaphor you've chosen was really a great one. It makes perfect sense, and it doesn't get confusing. Short and to the point, my kind of ...

I'll have to agree with most of the previous posts...I liked it a lot. But, like Fand, it doesn't really stand out in my mind. You would do weel to ...

I agree with Snoink and Misty for the most part. I mean, I liked it, but I think a shorter version might have sufficed. It was a little hard to ...

Ok so, I totally love the "more" part. If only this was as funny as the first part. Now, mind you, this is funny, the the first part was knee-slapping-on-the-floor-cracking-up ...

Aww, Wiggy! I loved it. It was so cute. And you really do have that little kid speak down pat. That made it much more realistic! I loved reading it. ...

I agree with writingluver. And about Neville. He would have been more emotional at Harry's death, I think. And the part about Ron killing Harry, even under the Imperious Curse? ...

This is ok. It's a great start to something. But, there's some un-needed information and then some stuff that seems to be missing. In short, it doesn't seem like a ...

I think that this was VERY well done. I loved reading it. The sort of saddened tone of it gave me chills, which is a good thing, I promise. I ...

I think I'll have to agree with Nate about taking out all the "likes". I think that would make it better, almost deeper somehow. At least, that's how it seems ...

I really liked the first one. It was well-written, and it made sense. I love how descriptive you were. I could really see what was going on. So, good use ...