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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: SABLE

    :( *cries* That was great Elliott....you should show Alex. It made we almost cry :( XXXXX [Caitlin]

    Oct 5, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Don't Look Back

    Hmm..this was interesting. I liked it a lot. It was well written, I mean last year when I was that old, I couldn't do a poem this weel written and ...

    Sep 10, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Mask of the Hidden

    Hey! I remember this!!! You showed it to me the last Christmas I was at your guys's house. I still like it a lot. And I really wasn't bored by ...

    Sep 10, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Titleless

    I would definitely have to agree with the previous posts. I didn't catch the metaphor, and nothing really climactic about it, but I really liked it for that reason, I ...

    Sep 9, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Wasting lines

    This was awesome! It's like, writer's block described completely. Well, the basis of it. I find that writer's block is not the same for every one, and you seemed to ...

    Sep 9, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Cell Phone Pimp

    I really liked this. This metaphor you've chosen was really a great one. It makes perfect sense, and it doesn't get confusing. Short and to the point, my kind of ...

    Sep 9, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Maybe

    I'll have to agree with most of the previous posts...I liked it a lot. But, like Fand, it doesn't really stand out in my mind. You would do weel to ...

    Sep 9, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Wet Flower

    I agree with Snoink and Misty for the most part. I mean, I liked it, but I think a shorter version might have sufficed. It was a little hard to ...

    Sep 9, 2007

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Prose: "Today Earth, tomorrow...the UNIVERSE!"

    Ok so, I totally love the "more" part. If only this was as funny as the first part. Now, mind you, this is funny, the the first part was knee-slapping-on-the-floor-cracking-up ...

    Aug 7, 2007

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Daddy's Baby Ruth

    Aww, Wiggy! I loved it. It was so cute. And you really do have that little kid speak down pat. That made it much more realistic! I loved reading it. ...

    Jul 29, 2007

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Harry Potter and the Alternate Ending

    I agree with writingluver. And about Neville. He would have been more emotional at Harry's death, I think. And the part about Ron killing Harry, even under the Imperious Curse? ...

    Jul 28, 2007

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Harry Potter fanfic (from epilogue)

    This is ok. It's a great start to something. But, there's some un-needed information and then some stuff that seems to be missing. In short, it doesn't seem like a ...

    Jul 28, 2007

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Grotesque

    I think that this was VERY well done. I loved reading it. The sort of saddened tone of it gave me chills, which is a good thing, I promise. I ...

    Jul 28, 2007

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: Something We ll Never Understand.

    I think I'll have to agree with Nate about taking out all the "likes". I think that would make it better, almost deeper somehow. At least, that's how it seems ...

    Jul 28, 2007

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Chechnya and Song about Burned Flag

    I really liked the first one. It was well-written, and it made sense. I love how descriptive you were. I could really see what was going on. So, good use ...

    Jul 27, 2007


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