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This is amazing, your rhyming skills are impressive. You worded everything perfectly in my opinion, and your structure is flawless. "When time is torture The temperature gets colder Wish I ...

Someone seems very angry. This was good; but if someone wasn't dying every other line I would like it much better, though I do understand that you were expressing your ...

I like everything but these two lines. They say you aren’t pretty or cool But we girls know, boys like to drool! The topic is pretty cool, it's been done ...

I loved it :) I liked your rhyme scheme, though you could use some more imagery here and there. I thought the poem was appropriately named, and I really liked ...

I like it sounds like a facebook status :) In the second line I think you meant "Your crazy green eyes" instead of "You crazy green eyes," Short + Sweet ...

Great start :) You need to work on the structure of your story, I found some grammatical errors... ex. (They thought it would nice to be here for two and ...

I understand what you were trying to do but this wasn't that interesting. Like the above post states this is a great concept, and I know you were using repetition ...

Nice, Nice, Nice :) The poem was consistently good, though the ending was obviously the best. Your choice of words is impressive, and this is a very good topic. There's ...