Hey there!
Wow! You've taken a pretty cool metaphor here and used it well throughout your poem. As people have obviously said before me, it was very nice.
I don't know, but you said in your comment that the love never existed at all. The last line kind of points towards that, but right up until then I was convinced it was a love who left or died. It's nice, but slightly confusing. Even with the last line I don't think I would have got that if not for your comment.
~Amy
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