This poem was extremely kawaii! it may have been short, but it was fun to read. This is like a poem about falling in love in high school. Again, very entertaining and I hope to read more from you.
Kman134, out!
I met you in the summer,
With your crazy green eyes,
And your crooked smile.
You stole my heart
Just by saying "hi".
And I don't mind.
You can keep my heart
If I can steal yours in return.
This poem was extremely kawaii! it may have been short, but it was fun to read. This is like a poem about falling in love in high school. Again, very entertaining and I hope to read more from you.
Kman134, out!
This was a cute poem. Very brief and to the point. My only real critique was the second to last line.
You wrote:
You can keep my heart
You can keep it
I like it sounds like a facebook status 
In the second line I think you meant "Your crazy green eyes" instead of "You crazy green eyes,"
Short + Sweet = My kind of writing
lol
3/5
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