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This is definitely going to be a great story,one about supernatural beings. I like the plot,its well laid out.The prologue too is wow,its leaves you craving for more of the ...

Well,I didn't the read story but I have few things to say. I guess your start off should be more formal, for example Dead Mrs Shannon,your book keeper of the ...

Hello ,this isn't much of a review,its just to make you know you are the best ...I disagree with the part where you said you would never be enough for ...

Hello, you have a beautiful poem here,the way you pictured yourself as a baby is wow Your poem describes exactly how the human mind works,how human feel compare to a ...

Hello,you have a good poem,but I think there are some things you need to know ...Your work needs space, poem should be in Stanzas, it look more like prose this ...

Its gonna make a good story,you are good to go,You would make an amazing writer. For your first story,you are really good.I give you a thumbs up. ...The way you ...

Its a good poem,it's real ams describe the feeling,it also encourages and give hope strengthen the spirit. Your poem heal the broken heart,it gives the assurance that everything would be ...

Hey,I'm here to review your work,I must say its a great piece,you are an amazing poet. Your work madr e understand life,the silent sufferings, pains,afflictions.Feeling lonely,unloved trying to cover

Oh my God,its a nice poem ..but you could had added some memories like maybe when you guys went somewhere and had fun or maybe when you did something funny. ...

Wow,its a great story..Its short and straight to the point.. ...I think you should proof read,for a while,you got me confused thinking Christina is a guy. ....You really did not ...