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Re: untitled
Hello there! What a wonderful day for a review! Even though this won't be a review... because I only have one thing to say. Punctuation. You will NEVER hear me ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: Shadow
Hey there! Guess who is getting their wonderful, splendid, spectacular, and a myriad of other adjectives poem reviewed! YOU!! Yaaay! Anywho, nice job here. I like the rhythm of it, ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: A Letter to Death
Hey there, and welcome to YWS! I almost scrolled past this without reviewing, but I think it has too much potential to ignore. The idea is awesome. I really like ...
Apr 29, 2016 -
Re: Invincible Prologue
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I am in need of a new novel to follow, and this prologue has me interesting in adopting yours to read through and provide feedback ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Untitled
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I haven't been on in a while, so I'd like to get back into the swing of things by reviewing this lovely work. I have ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: The Memory
Hello there! I really enjoyed this, and whenever I really enjoy a bit of writing, I feel it is my duty and my obligation to let the extremely talented young ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: The Inevitable
Welcome YWS! Because you asked so nicely I decided to stop by and leave a little review for you (well, that and reviewing is basically why I'm on this site ...
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: Fortissimo: Chapter Three (slice 2)
Hello! I just submitted a review for slice one like two minutes ago, so it's fresh in my mind. Here goes! Deranged hungry maniacs is an accurate description of ALL ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: Fortissimo: Chapter Three (slice 1)
WHY HAS NO ONE REVIEWED THIS? I read it when it first came out, but I'm going to go ahead and leave a review for you now. Just because you ...
Dec 15, 2015 -
Re: In the Cold of December
Hello! Its your friendly neighborhood Questio here to review! Lets get started: I'd like to start by saying that I think this is a that would be better told as ...
Nov 25, 2015 -
Re: To the Giants
Hello Caterpickle! Questio here for a review of this fine little piece of work. Firstly, I congratulate you for taking this a different direction than I was expecting. I thought ...
Nov 25, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
Hello! Questio here for a quick review! (Also, welcome to YWS!!!) Ok, so when I write poetry I love having structure and repetition, so this poem just makes me happy ...
Nov 23, 2015 -
Re: Not enough
Hello, and welcome to YWS! Its your friendly neighborhood Questio here to shoot you a quick review! So I was reading this and thinking "Nothing rhymes with the third line. ...
Nov 20, 2015 -
Re: The Ring
Hey there! Questio here with a review! You are right about the beat being a little off. Something that could help would be to get rid of the rhyming scheme. ...
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: Fortissimo: Chapter Two (part two)
Hey Snazzy! Questio here to give a review to this delightful addition to this delightful novel/book/thingy. I'll try to keep it short and to the point, which may be difficult, ...
Nov 19, 2015
