Hi!
First of all, I totally relate to your username. One of the things I look for in poetry is emotion - and this definitely has that. You highlight the emotion of grief with questions of such desperation and sadness...Honestly, it breaks my heart because I'm assuming this is based on a real experience. All in all, though only a few lines, your piece holds a lot of weight and is effective in conveying your feelings.
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