QueenofSomewhere

Hello! I'm here to leave a review on this lovely work! I really like this concept! The soul-sucking thing is a nice spin on the dystopian genre. I also enjoyed ...

Hello! Sorry for the lateness of this review! This chapter is pretty short, so we'll see how much I can unpack from it. It's really hard to capture a narrative ...

Alright, I'm back again! I'm going to try to be extra ridiculously thorough this time! We're learning more about Silira and her reasons for coming to land. Very exciting! It ...

Review time! I like the way this is structured! I like that the narrator seems to be addressing a different person in each stanza, and that each stanza has a ...

Okay, review! First of all, I'm interested in the characters and setting you have set up here, and I wish this chapter could have told me more about them! We ...

Okay! I haven't been reading this story, but I feel a pressing urge to get this lovely thing out of the Green Room. Forgive any misunderstandings. Even without reading the ...

Back again! Hooray! I like this running mystery about finding a soul and how Silira and Corwin might have known each other before. These ideas are developing really nicely and ...

Hey, I'm here as promised for a review! Overall this was a good chapter. We get more of a peak into how Silira came into her present situation, and what ...

Why have you done this? I need to sleep! Pardon me if this review is rather sedate. Thalia seems like a pretty cool character, and I imagine that in a ...

Alright! I've really enjoyed a lot of your acrostics popping up in the Green Room. This is in part because I've only ever seen acrostics as that meaningless thing I ...

Alright, review time! I think you might have a good idea here, but the presentation fell sorta flat, and I just don't think this is as impactful as some of ...

Hey! Happy Review Day! First of all, I really love this idea! The comedy in this piece was very well done and very relatable, actually. I remember Princess Alice. I ...

Okay. Here we go. 1. How did this make you feel while you were reading this? Unfortunately, or perhaps very fortunately, this is a message to which I struggle to ...

Alright! Review! Let's go! I'm going to try to be extra thorough! I really enjoyed this! I liked the imagery you used, and you have some really intriguing characters, especially ...

Behold, a review! Happy review day! First off, great job building suspense in first segment! That is not what I was expecting, and the tone of first few paragraphs makes ...