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This was cute and interesting. I liked the fun little story you had in here. I am not big on rhyming nor can I rhyme in a poem to save ...

I agree with Yanni1995. Just fix the one spelling mistake and punctuation and this poem will be fanstastico!! XD This was great. Good luck and Happy Writing!!! :)

I don't know but all your stuff is making me cry. I think that's a good thing. This poem was interesting. I liked the flow and the word choice. I ...

Ok, so I couldn't wait, you got me all curious. Haha. So I can't find anything wrong with this. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS. I can't really say how i feel ...

This has great potential but the onlything i really saw was you jumped into the plot a little too quickly without any backstory. Dont worry. I have that problem too. ...

You are so right. I'm straight but I have no problem with gays, bisexuals or tansgenders. Everyone is entitled to live their life how they seem fit and if that ...

This was interesting, as for the ending...i agree with you. it does need work. But at this moment i think im braindead too. XD So i can't really help, except ...

Omg. I know how that feels....ive had some stalkers...not gonna get into the specifics. But I did like the rhyming and it made me laugh, especially at the end. So, ...

Haha. I liked this. It was really funny. And I needed a laugh. And what you said is so true. I think my moms has figured out i havent been ...

This poem was very intersting, I love how the narrator potrayed different emotions, mostly the sadness of not having anyone in their happily ever after. The thing that was a ...

ok first thing is first. I liked this story. I loved the imagery in the preface. IcyFlame basically said what I was going to. so i wont repeat. but i ...

Omg. I love this. you don't know how much I love all things bibical related. it is very personal for me. I'm not going to repeat any of what everyone ...

This was a really good story, i couldn't stop reading. It sort of reminds me of Never-Ending Story. And I saw that movie like a billion times. So that's a ...

This story was interesting, it had me reading through the end. I thought it was good. The only thing was the ending was a little bit of an upset. but ...

This was a great story. It was so sad. It had me reading til the end. I didn't see anything particularly wrong with it. Except maybe you should add a ...