Purnima

Hello! Purnima here to leave a review. Happy review day! :D This was a really interesting read and I'm captivated by the setting you have here. What I'm going to ...

Hello SoundsofSilence! I'm here to leave a review on this new chapter of yours. Happy review day! :D I was really interested when I saw the summary of this chapter. ...

Hello there! Happy review day! I know I haven't reviewed the first chapter but I understood enough to gain some context and here I am to leave a review on ...

Hello, Wasabi! Happy review day. :D This is definitely not what I expected when I saw that it was categorized under humor. Unless you were going for a certain kind ...

Hi there! Happy review day. :D Ok, first off, I know this is probably just a small chunk from somewhere within your total story but I like how you've written ...

Hello Nightcrawler! Happy review day. :D So, I absolutely love this. It flows so freely and the lack of punctuation and capitalization or proper structure gives it a sort of ...

Hello hello! I'm here with a review for you! Happy review day. :D This was such a lovely story. I really like how you've focused on one aspect of Chelsea's ...

Hello hello! This was a really interesting story. It's the kind I would expect to find in a children's book with a moral at the end. I could also find ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS! This is a really interesting piece. I like the way you've lingered on the descriptions and brought out the character's feelings and uncertainty in this. You've ...

Hello there! This was a really interesting passage. I like how you haven't given any indicator as to what's actually happening until the very end. The last line was really ...

Hello there! I see that the previous reviewer has pointed out most of the punctuation and spacing errors so I'll just give some general feedback on each of the aspects. ...