PsyLynx

HAHAHAHA, I AM A GOD! *Takes a bow and smotes thee who does as they do in Egypt (see Levidicus, the chapter where they talk about what you can and ...

yeah, it is another damn cliche love poem, but you gotta give it its dues, it was done well, and it wasn't trying to be original. Or if it was, ...

I don't know what to think about it. Just a thought more than even a poem...hmmm. Something to meditate on. I like it as that. And it isn't the sort ...

man, fuck this, fuck you, fuck anger. Mark Twain once said, "wisdom is the reward one gives themself for a lifetime of listening when they would rather have talked." I've ...

good, man. Don't ever feel bad for posting anything. Hell, don't feel bad for anything that you can't change, ever. Hell, don't feel bad. Now that I've endowed you with ...

Yes, I liked it. It though it was for children...but there was nothing about it that made it so that adults shouldn't read it. I liked it, a lot. But ...

I can relate. And I'm going to tell you something and I don't know if you're going to believe me, but a friend of mine told me the same tale, ...

Why has nobody else commented? I like this a lot; it does capture a lot of writing...the loneliness, the fact that often, we must force ourselves to do it, and ...

I love "sweat-mirrored walls of my mind" But the poem, overall, didn't leave much of an impression because I couldn't tell why the narrator was feeling the way they were, ...

It seems like you have a lot of talent, but yet you forced this, like you consciously decided to write a poem and consciously decided what it should be about ...

okay, read. I think you should add a character right there; I still don't have much of a clue who the narrator is or why he/she's damned to I want ...

please, please, please teach me to write. Please, please, please please please. DragonTheFifth (AIM), 23592752 (ICQ), (MSN, e-mail addy) please contact me, please teach me.

I definitely think that it would be good with a very brief introduction, just so that the audience doesn't have to guess as to what you're talking about, because I ...

for this kind of poem, this was very good. These sort of old-style tale-poems of wisdom, the sort of stuff that I'll find in my Brit Lit text book. Not ...

you're a rude, insensitive douchebag. It just bugs me because everyone is, (and yes, I have been too.) Stop it, it's annoying. You know nothing about the world, I know ...