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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 7

    Let's dance,shall we Little Fox? Note: I'm sorry if the colors are confusing, I just figured that they are the easiest way to point out things and parts of speech ...

    Jun 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Little & Red

    Heya Deanie, I already once read your short story in the Writers Tournament, and I actually voted on it so here I am today to review it. I am very ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 2.3

    Heya Noelle, Pretzelsing here for a review. I almost can't believe that I am the first one to be reviewing this,since this has been in the green room for 5 ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~I Part One

    Heya r4, Pretzlesing here of a review of your novel. I haven't revisited this in a week, but I know that you left off with a cliffhanger,so I am very ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cactus Leaves-- Order of Light (Ch. 3)

    Heya Widdershins, here I am to review the next chapter of your novel. You haven't really updated this in quite a while, but I am glad to see that you ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: No such thing(1): Happy endings

    Heya goldypopo, I saw this in the green room and I promised you to receive it. *pings godly with a notif about this review* ;) I will promise and try ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, Historical Fiction Re: This is our land

    Heya grandfather, Pretzel here for a review. I felt like I needed to review this since you had 2 fairly short reviews, and I see that this has just been ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Other » Politics, Other Re: Dear Aliens

    Heya Holysocks,Pretzelsing here for a review of this work that you made.I know that I have been on a review role with your works, and I will tell you why ...

    Jun 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Instinct - Chapter 1

    Heya ChiravienSkies, Pretzelsing here for a review of this first chapter of your novel. I am aiming to experiment a little bit with my review format, so please bear along ...

    Jun 6, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Girls Tell Me Things

    Heya Uncon, I wanted to review this recent piece that you posted, as I see that you didn’t really get much reviews at all(like were constructive and helpful at least.) ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Mischief Moon #2

    Heya Holy, Pretzel here for a review of this second part of the short story that you wrote. I reviewed the last part yesterday, so I know exactly what happened ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Art » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mischief Moon #1

    Heya Holy, Pretzelsing here to review this first and second part of your short story. I see that you have some shorter reviews down below, and be warned that I ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Whirlpool Love

    Heya Uncon, Pretzelsing here for a review of this work. I will be writing these points as I read this, so please bear along with me. I see that you ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 2

    Heya Adri, Pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. Thanks for posting it, because I wanted to keep on seeing what is going to happen ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch

    Heya Sarah, I am here to read the first chapter of your novel, even though I have so many other novels that I am following, I just couldn’t resist this ...

    Jun 1, 2015


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