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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 7

    Let's dance,shall we Little Fox? Note: I'm sorry if the colors are confusing, I just figured that they are the easiest way to point out things and parts of speech ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Little & Red

    Heya Deanie, I already once read your short story in the Writers Tournament, and I actually voted on it so here I am today to review it. I am very ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 2.3

    Heya Noelle, Pretzelsing here for a review. I almost can't believe that I am the first one to be reviewing this,since this has been in the green room for 5 ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~I Part One

    Heya r4, Pretzlesing here of a review of your novel. I haven't revisited this in a week, but I know that you left off with a cliffhanger,so I am very ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Cactus Leaves-- Order of Light (Ch. 3)

    Heya Widdershins, here I am to review the next chapter of your novel. You haven't really updated this in quite a while, but I am glad to see that you ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: No such thing(1): Happy endings

    Heya goldypopo, I saw this in the green room and I promised you to receive it. *pings godly with a notif about this review* ;) I will promise and try ...

    Jun 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, Historical Fiction Re: This is our land

    Heya grandfather, Pretzel here for a review. I felt like I needed to review this since you had 2 fairly short reviews, and I see that this has just been ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Other » Politics, Other Re: Dear Aliens

    Heya Holysocks,Pretzelsing here for a review of this work that you made.I know that I have been on a review role with your works, and I will tell you why ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Instinct - Chapter 1

    Heya ChiravienSkies, Pretzelsing here for a review of this first chapter of your novel. I am aiming to experiment a little bit with my review format, so please bear along ...

    Jun 6, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Girls Tell Me Things

    Heya Uncon, I wanted to review this recent piece that you posted, as I see that you didn’t really get much reviews at all(like were constructive and helpful at least.) ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Mischief Moon #2

    Heya Holy, Pretzel here for a review of this second part of the short story that you wrote. I reviewed the last part yesterday, so I know exactly what happened ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Art » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mischief Moon #1

    Heya Holy, Pretzelsing here to review this first and second part of your short story. I see that you have some shorter reviews down below, and be warned that I ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Whirlpool Love

    Heya Uncon, Pretzelsing here for a review of this work. I will be writing these points as I read this, so please bear along with me. I see that you ...

    Jun 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 2

    Heya Adri, Pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. Thanks for posting it, because I wanted to keep on seeing what is going to happen ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch

    Heya Sarah, I am here to read the first chapter of your novel, even though I have so many other novels that I am following, I just couldn’t resist this ...

    Jun 1, 2015


Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream.
— Mark Twain