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Re: Adonia, Beloved / Chapter 7
Let's dance,shall we Little Fox? Note: I'm sorry if the colors are confusing, I just figured that they are the easiest way to point out things and parts of speech ...
Jun 27, 2015 -
Re: Little & Red
Heya Deanie, I already once read your short story in the Writers Tournament, and I actually voted on it so here I am today to review it. I am very ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Burned 2.3
Heya Noelle, Pretzelsing here for a review. I almost can't believe that I am the first one to be reviewing this,since this has been in the green room for 5 ...
Jun 18, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~I Part One
Heya r4, Pretzlesing here of a review of your novel. I haven't revisited this in a week, but I know that you left off with a cliffhanger,so I am very ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Cactus Leaves-- Order of Light (Ch. 3)
Heya Widdershins, here I am to review the next chapter of your novel. You haven't really updated this in quite a while, but I am glad to see that you ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: No such thing(1): Happy endings
Heya goldypopo, I saw this in the green room and I promised you to receive it. *pings godly with a notif about this review* ;) I will promise and try ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: This is our land
Heya grandfather, Pretzel here for a review. I felt like I needed to review this since you had 2 fairly short reviews, and I see that this has just been ...
Jun 7, 2015 -
Re: Dear Aliens
Heya Holysocks,Pretzelsing here for a review of this work that you made.I know that I have been on a review role with your works, and I will tell you why ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Instinct - Chapter 1
Heya ChiravienSkies, Pretzelsing here for a review of this first chapter of your novel. I am aiming to experiment a little bit with my review format, so please bear along ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Girls Tell Me Things
Heya Uncon, I wanted to review this recent piece that you posted, as I see that you didn’t really get much reviews at all(like were constructive and helpful at least.) ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Mischief Moon #2
Heya Holy, Pretzel here for a review of this second part of the short story that you wrote. I reviewed the last part yesterday, so I know exactly what happened ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Mischief Moon #1
Heya Holy, Pretzelsing here to review this first and second part of your short story. I see that you have some shorter reviews down below, and be warned that I ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Whirlpool Love
Heya Uncon, Pretzelsing here for a review of this work. I will be writing these points as I read this, so please bear along with me. I see that you ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 2
Heya Adri, Pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. Thanks for posting it, because I wanted to keep on seeing what is going to happen ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: The Days We'll Never Forget: Chapter One - Titch
Heya Sarah, I am here to read the first chapter of your novel, even though I have so many other novels that I am following, I just couldn’t resist this ...
Jun 1, 2015
