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Re: Ruptured Mind 1.2 (Ever-changing Title)
Heya Timmy, here I am for this lovely review day, trying to catch some points for my time while reviewing your ever-changing title of a novel. I have read the ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.2]
Heya Pretzelsing here for a review. I just decided to go through all of my old reviews and try to follow up on them by writing reviews to the next ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 1/5
Heya steam, I am so determined to get through all five parts of your short story. I have once promised that I would review everything that you ever posted. So ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.1]
Heya Lightsong, thanks for requesting a review in my thread. I am here to fulfill it, and sorry for the lateness of it, but I have a lot of requests, ...
Aug 29, 2015 -
Re: Ruptured Mind 1.1 (Ever-changing Title)
Heya TimmyJake, here I am to review the first chapter of your LMS novel. I have made it a goal to review each and every first chapter that participants of ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 1 (Rewrite)
Heya SpiritedWolfe, I have made it a goal, to slowly, but surely review and read every at least first chapter of LMS participants, because that will be my way of ...
Jul 25, 2015 -
Re: Short Poem #1: Untitled
Heya IronSpark, here I am to drop a review for the Big Review. I think that I will start with the general and then move onto line to line analysis. ...
Jul 25, 2015 -
Re: The Damage (Ch. 1)
Heya Carlito, here I am for the Big Review, as you requested. I read this once, and I really felt like reviewing it, especially since it's the one work that ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: A Sonnet To War
Heya Iron, Pretzel here for the Big Review. So, you have tried your hand on a sonnet huh? That's so cool. I will try to go along and point out ...
Jul 11, 2015 -
Re: Choice to Change: Danger in a Safe Haven
Heya Wolfe (and Noelle), here I am writing a review for Rydia’s Big Review! I hope that this counts-and I don’t know the rules specifically, and I’m not trying to ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: Worlds Collide (Part 1)
Heya Me, Pretzel here for the Big Review, and here I am as requested by you. First impressions: My first impressions were that this story sucked me in, into another ...
Jul 8, 2015 -
Re: The Chalice of Life: Chapter 1
Heya yizhongt, Pretzel here for a review as you requested. -I wanted to start off with: I like that you added a lot of cool genres into this one chapter. ...
Jul 2, 2015 -
Re: #Homophobe
Heya dragon, Pretzel here for a review. Before we start, I got to say that I personally admire you for standing up for your beliefs, and speaking out upon your ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Ch. 3
Heya Adri,I know that you are getting a ton of reviews on this at one time,but I would also like to add my two cents. I have actually read and ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Burned 3.1
Heya Noelle, Pretzelsing here for a review of this work,which is in the Green Room for this fine Review Day. Let's dance,darling! I really like that the action of this ...
Jun 27, 2015