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Re: Came Along
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I am a romance novel freak so this is totally my type of genre.Let's get to the review itself. First if all you should ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Lady- Chapter 2
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I thought that this was an intersting story to say in the least. Now I haven't read the previous chaprer but here, this quote ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 7: The Tale
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I am jumping into the middle of you story so please bear along with me: I also noticed that you didn't rate your story ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Black Bands: Chapter 1 - Why are we here?
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say that I truly like thte suspense in this story kept me on the edge of my bed.Here are the conntent ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Thorns Of Destiny - Chapter Three
Heya,pretzlesing here for a review, I am going to tell you that this story was very suspenseful and kept me at the edge of my seat this whole time. Here ...
Jan 22, 2015 -
Re: The Native Man's Curse
Heya,pretzelsing here for a review! I really liked this poem, Tiffany Toy, it was great. I am here writing a review for you, because one of my friends encouraged me ...
Jan 22, 2015 -
Re: The Door To Arabeth (Part: 2)
Heya pretzelsing is here for a review, I really liked this next section,although, I think that it is too short to be a chapter. Here are my nitpicks and points. ...
Jan 22, 2015 -
Re: The Door To Arabeth
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I see that you are a very new YWS and I have to say welcome to out club, I hope that you like it ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: Magic Realm the seconded part.
Heya pretzelsing here and I am going to try to generally review your work as much as possible. Overall this work does have potential but it is very confusing and ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: Life Support of a Different Kind
Heya pretelsing here for a review. I am trying to review many different works outside of my comfort zone so here I am. First of all, I have to comment ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: Never a tomorrow.
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I have to say before I start that I LOVE this was touching my heart and left tears in my eyes.I usually have a ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: There's something odd about odd numbers
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, First if all I have to say that I personally really liked it.I was creepy but maintained one main theme throughout your whole story, ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: Wonderful Day
Hello pretzelsing here and I want to review your piece, I think that your work is great, BUT is needs a lot of polishing, editing, and attention. First of all, ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Redemption
Hi, pretzelsing here to start for a review, I will try and have a critical eye on your writing. Let's start at the beginning. I think that this is a ...
Jan 20, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 9 Ally
Hi pretzelsing here for a review, I am jumping into the middle of your story and plot line. Here are my tidbits and nitpicks: First of all, I really like ...
Jan 20, 2015