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Re: Burned 1.1
Heya Noelle, here I am, reading the edited version of your first chapter.I saw this and so I wanted to review it *is a follower of this forever*. Anyways, I ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One- Chapter 4.1
Heya ThereseCricket,pretzelsing here for a review of another cahotervof your novel. I will be writing this reviews in block of time(just like I think you do) sonpleae excuse my disconnection.I ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~E Part Two
Heya pretzelsing here for a review, I actually approve of the plot twist that Katya died,because it puts a spin on the whole story.Katya is the only one who had ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 12
Heya sugar,pretzelsing here for a review of the next chapter of you book.YAY!This chapter,like all of them was so great!
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 2 (Escaping Dash)
Heya JKHatt, pretzelsing here to review the next chapter of your novel "Dash".YAY! *dances around in a circle* I gotta love this chapter!
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Expectations (monologue)
Heya godlypopo, pretzelsing here for a review as requested/promised. Let's begin, shall we? First of all the grammatically correct way to write an ellipsis is: Space dot space dot space ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 3
Heya ThereseCricket, pretzelsing here for a review. no I won't comment on the shortness-since that is how you like it Let's begin,shall we? But there was nothing still. This was ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~D Part Two
Heya r4p17,pretzelsing here for a review of the next chapter of your novel. Anyways,let's begin,shall we? Here is my legend for nitpicks(yes I know that this is new but I ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: The Doors To Arabeth (Post #3 Chapter #10)
Heya Alyssa, Pretzelsing here for a review of this work, Hmmm...I am not sure how I feel about skipping to Chapter 10,just because we are missing a lot of vital ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 11 Part 2
Heya there sugar, pretzelsing here for another review of you beautifully written novel. Let's begin,shall we? "We've been hearing whispers that the little people of the world are becoming unhappy. ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 2
Heya ThereseCricket, pretzelsing here of a review of the second chapter of your novel! YAY! Let's begin,shall we? Here is my legend of color(for nitpicks): Pink~ Removal Blue~ Correction Purple~ ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 1 (Before the Dash)
Heya JKHatt, pretzelsing here for a review of your novel. I am starting with chapter 1 and slowly reading and making my way until chapter 4. Anyways, let's begin,shall we? ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Legend of The Scale, Ch. 1 Trako
Heya Timmy, pretzelsing here for a review, I have read the newest version of this chapter, and I know you are experimenting with these so I am here to give ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~D Part One
Heya R4P17, pretzelsing here for a review of your next chapter.Anyways,let's begin,shall we? We are less than a hundred feet from the top of the highest mountain around us; but ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Path
Heya Kyllorac, pretzelsing here for a review today. Ohh, the last story that you posted on here(so far) YAY! Now I am all caught up with your novel. Let's begin ...
Mar 29, 2015