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Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Eight
Heya firefly, pretzelsing here with the first review of this chapter. You have posted in quite a while so I am trying to refresh my memory. Anyways,let's begin,shall we? WOW! ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 6.1
Heya Deanie, pretzelsing here for a review,I have a couple of suggestion to make this chapter more intense filled.Thank you so much for posting another chapter of your beautiful novel. ...
Apr 29, 2015 -
Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 2.1
Heya Wolfare, pretzelsing here for a review of the second chapter of your novel. I will really try to review and catch up but I have a lot of other ...
Apr 28, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~F Part Two
Heya r4p17,pretzelsing here for a review, I am trying to cut down on my nitpicks a little bit and dive into more of the general so I will try my ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 12 Part 3
Heya sugar,pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter on review day. Anyways,let's begin,shall we? A bed, a vanity, and a coffee table lay behind them which was disappointingly ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Prologue Part 1
Heya MaddieMouse, I read this first part of this prologue and I have got to say,you have a follower for life.(that means forever-for the rest of the novel.) I see ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 4 (Sky Dash)
Heya JKHatt, pretzelsing here for another review of the next chapter of your novel.Today is review day and so I am trying to catch up on chapter of novels that ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Marvin- Chapter 2
Heya Tuesday, pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. I have silent review day trying to catch up here with some chapters that I haven't ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Typo Alley~F Part One
Heya r4p17, pretzelsing here for a review of your next chapter of this novel. I see that you have some very thorough review here but I will try to add ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 4.2
Heya ThereseCricket, pretzelsing here for a review. I read through this chapter twice so let's begin, shall we? . Even the very sound of the birds chirping outside her window, ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 12 Part 2
Heya sugar, I see here that you only have 2 reviewers and so I am here top fix that. Anyways, let's begin, shall we?? Holding his breath as he balanced ...
Apr 25, 2015 -
Re: Dash - Chapter 3 (Dash for Charbrush)
Heya JKHatt pretzelsing here for a review of this next chapter of your novel. I t this on a month so here I go. Anyways, let's begin, shall we? The ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: Lament of the Butterfly
Heya TheDoctor, I am here to give a thorough review of your poem.I have to say before I start that I really liked the idea of it. Anyways,let's begin,shall we? ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: Marvin-Chapter 1
Hello Tuesday,pretzelsing here for a review I read this first and I have to say that it's quite entertaining & amusing. Anyways,let's begin the review,shall we!? ” The robot groaned ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: Phoenix Inferno 1
Heya Chrissy, first review here, since I want to keep on earning badges for KotGR. and I don't want to fall behind. well,well,well what do you we have here? A ...
Apr 18, 2015