Pompadour

Hi there! Pomp here for a review day review. I haven't read the previous chapter, so I'm going to go mostly off of what I see here. My primary complaint ...

Hello. Pomp here for a Review Day review~ The first thing I noticed was that this chapter is very dialogue-heavy. While that's not necessarily a bad thing, it doesn't really ...

Hi there. You have a knack for word-choice and the way you describe things is like coating clouds with molten gold. There's a fluidity in your prose that I really ...

Hello. Welcome to YWS! I do not appreciate the way the narrator uses parentheses in the prose; it's very unwieldy and makes the sentences read quite clunkily. It's also rather ...

hey, fort. i don't think i've ever really reviewed any of your poetry, but there's a first time for everything, eh? (though really, there's so very little to critique and ...

Hey there, Ashley! Pomp here for a review~ Nice title to the novel, by the way. 'Flux' is a cool word. So the first things that immediately jumped out at ...

Hey, Scar! Pomp here for a RD review~ Forgive me my incoherence. I'm short on time so this is pretty hurried. I haven't ever worked with Quaterns before, but I ...

Hullo. Pompadour here for a quick review. This is page 189 of your novel? If so, it explains why I am having difficulty in understanding who a lot of the ...

As promised~ Sorry for the lateness! I started writing this review, but life tossed me into a trainwreck and I completely forgot to complete it. (As a result, this review ...

Hey there. I saw part four to this sequence hanging out in the Green Room and thought I'd drop by to review! That said, I'm pretty rusty on reviewing, so ...

Hullo. My main concern in this poem is the way in which the poet has utilised imagery; however, I'll try to talk about the more concrete stuff as well, like ...

Hello! I greatly enjoyed this. It's the kind of work I would like to reread and dissect thoroughly again and again; there's a lot that's going on, surprisingly, surrounding the ...

As requested~ Sorry for the lateness! I'm a bit rusty on reviewing, so forgive me as I try to find my feet. (I should really be more careful about where ...

Hullo. Here to review as requested! I'm typing this out on a phone, so please ignore any odd typos and general phone-keyboard-related errors. My main critique is probably going to ...

Hello, Pomp here for a quick review. I haven't read any of your poetry before, but the last few lines in this poem are absolutely lovely and carry this nostalgic ...