Pompadour

Ehhh. I'm sorry I'm being so slow with these reviews. But I'll hopefully be able to catch up this weekend. >.> Anywhoo, let's get cracking! I was almost dead. Okay, ...

You have very creative chapter titles, I must say. XD Very amusing. I didn't really understand what was going on in the beginning. Wasn't Will driving the car? Then did ...

Hey, Wise! As promised, I'm here for the first chapter! Happy Review Day! Oohkay, so I really liked the way you began this chapter. It was very engaging, and also ...

Back for more! Happy Review Day~ "We haven't talked in awhile . " ~ Insert period before quotation mark. ~ 'awhile' ought to be two separate words: 'a while.' Quite ...

Hey, Wisegirl! I haven't read any of the other chapters, but I'll try and backtrack as soon as I can, okay? Happy Review Day! Ooh, Percy Jackson fanfiction! Now that's ...

Yo. I is back for more~ Moments later, before I could reply—before the words had formulated in my mind—the lights flickered above. Fluorescents shine down upon us, just like they ...

Happy Review Day! :D Okay, so I'm back for the second chapter and I'm intending to make this review a quick one. Probably this'll be more thought on what's happened ...

Uhm... review? I shall review! Looking for catch-phrases sorry. I've had no luck so far. Happy Review Day! Ooh, I like this. I like that you're writing in Third Person ...

Hola, thetejmahal! Pompadour here to review this lovely piece for you today! I like how you started out with a statement. Snappish. Your narrative voice is pretty strong and clear-sounding ...

Ayano is cool. Pompadour is back for another review! I need a better catch-phrase. >.> ALSO I DID NOT FORGET ABOUT REVIEWING THIS I SWEAR. except for the one beggar ...

Hey there, Anne! Welcome to YWS~ I'm in a bit of a rush, so this is going to have to a be a quick review. So the first thing that ...

Hallo, Fiendy! Pompadour here to review as requested~ Well, this was certainly an enjoyable read! I'm always up for a good rhyming poem, especially if they're the kind you can ...

Ihavesomuchtocatchuponohemgee. Someone's been busy. :o Let's get to business. *cracks knuckles* I felt like a beast was perched on my chest, crushing my ribs, holding me down. I tried to ...

Hey, Raven! Pompadour here for a quick review on your poem! This is going to be pretty short, but bear with me and I'll try to be as thorough as ...

Guten Tag! Konnichiwa! Hola and Bonsoir! Pompadour here to review~ Ooh, okay, so this is pretty different from the original version, and I must admit it also flows much better. ...