Pompadour

Hey there, Waning~ Welcome to YWS! The beginning of the piece feels rather hurried; it was like falling headfirst into a maelstrom and trying to locate your feet. The narrator ...

Yo, Fort! Finally here to review~ As per usual, I'll scroll through the technical stuff first and leave a couple of comments here and there. Then, we'll talk general. Also, ...

Hey, Pretz. I saw this hanging out in the Green Room, so I thought I'd pop by and leave a quick review. ^^ "BAM!" t T he loud sound dispersed ...

Hey, ash! Pompadour here for a quick review~ So, wow, you wrote this in ten minutes? That's some fast writing, and it's always good to write down spur of the ...

Heyo, Wolf! I'm rather rusty on reviewing, so egh, your prologue is going to be my lab rat for today. As it is, I'll try to make this thorough; I'm ...

Heeello. I saw you were scavenging for reviews, so I thought I'd pop by. I'm going to make this quick, though; I should be studying. XD Cassander slowly approached the ...

Hey, Birk~ So I'm no big shot at reviewing poetry, but you haven't received much constructive criticism here and I thought I'd leave a quick review. So, overall, I really ...

Hey, Emma! Welcome to YWS~ I'm a bit rusty on reviewing, so I'll try to make this quick. So, first off, you have quite the handle on the technicalities of ...

HEY THERE. So I figured I'd review this from my phone just because. It also kinda helps me procrastinate on my Maths revision, but hey, I'm never one to turn ...

Hello! I'm short on time here so I'll make this quick. Welcome to YWS~ So there were a lot of cliché images here combined with some less-trite metaphors; I honestly ...

Hello~ You've mentioned in your Author's note that you're not a poet, but I thought I'd drop by with a review anyway. Poetry is an absolutely lovely creature, and I ...

Hello. Welcome to YWS~! I'm reviewing this from my phone so I'll make this quick. You begin with a run-on sentence. This is never a good thing. Too many things ...

Howza, Beanie! Thought I'd pop by for a quick review. Be warned: I'm typing this out on a phone. Any oddities in my spelling can be blamed entirely on my ...

Yo. Welcome to YWS~ I'm going to make this review short and to-the-point. Half this poem is running away into the horizon with no set destination; your first few lines, ...

Yo. I'm on a phone as I type this so I'm going to make this quick. Please excuse any odd typos/letterage; you can blame my autocorrect for that. (Welcome to ...