PollarBear14

L-O-V-E I-T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To be honest I don't get it. It sounds nice and has good language and flow but I just don't understand. Then again I only read it quickly. Nice work. ...

Great poem!

My gramar isnt very good. Sorry about that. Thanks for your comments!

I want to write a long review for this so i can get lots of points but all I can say is BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice!

Nice. Emotional. Eloquent. Good job. I agree about the pupils though. Find a synonym.

I loved it. The originality was refreshing and the ideas were great. I love your last line. I don't think it matters that it was written as one paragragh because ...

Brilliant.

Great poem. Well thought out. Keep writing.

A quick review. Good poem but my one complaint is that you rhyme in some places but not in others. It is confusing and does not benefit the poem. Either ...

Thanks remember20 for your feedback. I agree with all of your sugestions so thanks for the help and the positive feedback. It's great for my poetry-writing confidence. By the way, ...

I'll admit that I don't really understand this poem but that does not stop me from really enjoying it. I really like the multiple paradox's all strung together to make ...

I love this poem. The language is exceptional. Such unique, graceful descriptions create beautiful mental scenes. Every word fits really well with the natural theme. Fantastic. The second stanza is ...

I really liked this poem. I have no complaints at all. I loved the language, the thoughts and the emotions coming throught the words. Thanks very much for sharing this ...