Published November 9, 2011
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You're a great writer.
For me, your poem speaks about freedom in the midst of shackles that tends to hinder the speaker to be himself.
It's like the speaker wants to free himself from the bondage of pretending.
I want to write a long review for this so i can get lots of points but all I can say is BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks fer the suggestions aye
I have no say means in the world my words are worth nothing and I have no say in anything, a phrase
Thanks again =)
Hi there. This is well-written. I liked this very much.
But I think I want to do some changes in these lines...
And I don't really understand with this line?
But that's just me. You are yourself a good writer so these are just some of my suggestions.
Keep writing!