PollarBear14

Great poem! You can't make a rainbow, Nor strive to reach the pot of gold - It's story of colour can never be told. Unless the skies completely split, And ...

Hi! I loved this piece! It had so many moments where I just went "Wow that was a nice touch." To be honest though, I liked the first two stanzas ...

This is great. I can feel your emotions and I love how you linked them to a current issue/event. The title doesn't set the poem up to be dark and ...

Hi. I think this is fantastic. It really puts into words that infuriating feeling of trying to teach but not being listened to and it does that very well. I ...

Wow! This poem is amazing and so are you. I am usually put off by long poems but this one drew me in and had me hooked till the very ...

This was a very nice poem. Well thought out and brilliantly executed. Dance around the bloody roses Veil your face in the thicket of lies I love this line! Good ...

Hey. I don't have time to write a long review so all I will say is 1. Great poem! 2. It should be "Was just a dumb jock." It flows ...

This is great! Its one of those poems that stands out because of its unique qualities. This poem will go far. First of all, I love your structure. I love ...

Fantastic poem! I loved every bit. What am I in this sea of life? Am I unique? Or am I common? Many people filled with strife Ask this boring question ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I liked the dark, twisted feel it had. a few things though. The cool blade slices across the pink flesh. Crimson liquid leaks through the ...

Hi! I liked your poem. It had nice language and a nice rhyming scheme. The ideas were good aswell. I think its a bit short though. You could go into ...

Very nice. Good use of vocabulary. Good ideas. I have one problem though. I know you used "Tis" so that the lines would fit as an iambic pentameter but I ...

Hi. I'm sorry but i don't really like this poem. I get the idea but it is not executed very well at all. Firt of all you need to be ...

Nice. Its great how you value the simplicity of a cloud so much and are able to express that love. I look up high above, And think about what they ...

Hey. This is quite a nice feel-good poem. I like the simplicity of the language and the emotion in the words. But to be honest it was a bit boring........ ...