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wow, thanks again!!!

Hey, really good poem! don't know much about poetry, but that was really pretty. Makes me think about my life.

Thanks so much! I'm considering writing a short story prequel, something I've never done...does anyone do that? I really like that song too!! Thank you very much! I'll have to ...

Wow, you are REALLY helpful!! thank you so much for the tips! I don't have very much experience on this site, do you think I should make the changes and ...

that made my day.

Whaaaaat? That didn't make much sense. It was leading up to nothing. However, I did like the feel and some of the mystery. The fantasy stuff was pretty cool.

Excellent!! Needs paragraphs though. I love the emotion, and simplicity of this story. Great ending. Enjoyed it very much!

Excellent!! Needs paragraphs though. I love the emotion, and simplicity of this story. Great ending. Enjoyed it very much!

HOLY HEAVEN!! THAT WAS GOOD!!! Perfect emotion!! Great message!! I especially like the part when she says "will somebody just please forgive me?". To me, that reminded me of the ...

I don't know that much about poetry, but that was really pretty...and cool...and kinda creepy, poem. I liked it.

Very good opening!! No joke! This really begins something epic!

My sister and I took turns reading this for fun--and boy did we have FUN!! You did capture my interest, and my sister's as well. Now, I just have to ...