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I get to review another mag! Anyway, ZLYF here for Review Day and Poetry Exchange! I really like your choice of topic, the use of a different looking glass to ...

Magpie! I’m ZLYF, here at your service. *bows* The winds of Poetry Exchange and Review Day has brought me here. I really really (repeat that a million times) like your ...

Hey GreenTulip, ZLYF here for Review Day as well as the Poetry Exchange. This is a really great piece of sad poetry, I must say. Ok first off, I don’t ...

Hey Shadow! I’m here for the review exchange! This piece is seriously good, and I’m not sure I can give much help here, but I’ll do my best. I’ll follow ...

I hope I'm doing a helpful review here :P here for the poetry exchange!! I'm just going to add the metric to my draft review so a metric will appear ...

Hi Magpie! Here for the Review Exchange! I’m going to start off with a look at the rhythm of this piece. So your rhythm goes: 5-3-8-6-7-8-8-8-7-7-7-2-1; 8-6-9-9-7-6-6; 6-4-9-7-9-8-6-7-3; 6-4-8-6-8-6

Hey amber! First of all, a big huggles and welcoming spin to YWS! If you need any help don't hesitate to PM me. If you need any reviews done, feel ...

Hey Therese! Nice seeing something from you! Alright, this is a really great poem, but it lacks the force that this subject can and should give. You need more vivid ...

Now this. This chapter is a vast improvement in terms of where the story is going! I absolutely love this. There are the usual grammatical and spelling errors, but as ...

Alright! Sorry I took so long on this review, but here’s to hoping I do it right! Ok, let’s start off with what I liked about this piece. I like ...

Hey Iggy! I'm back to return the really helpful review you made! I really like the emotion presented in this piece. However I have a few quibbles. ...making me grab ...

Hey paracosm! Here I am to review! This is a great piece and it has great rhythm. However in the words there are too many repetitions, and also a lack ...

Yayayay!!! I absolutely love doctor who! I really like the classic doctors even though I prefer the newer ones. But we should get to business! What I like about this ...

This is very sad. You have no reviews for almost a month!! Thus I dispatch myself to review this as quick as I can. I like how there are several ...

Alright let's review this new member piece for review day!! Let's look at your rhythm first of all. Remember that all poetry has rhythm as a foundation. Without rhythm, your ...