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Re: What shall I do?
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! I was just cruising through greenroom, and clicked on your work. Well, I saw something that made me gag, and now I have to ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: The Colours Shaped Me, Father
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Cool poem! I love it. Just have a few things that need fixing. Congratulation on making spotlight, btw. That's awesome! Well, one thing I ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Chapter One - Brothers Feud (not sure if im keeping the tittle)
Heya, Christina here for a review! Finally! One of your works. *evil laugh* Now I can rip it to shreds! Let's see... What can I find? she was to be ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: The dream of a song...
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, I'm not much good at reviewing poetry, but I will try and do my best. Still waiting for you, hear the song I ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Chapter One: A Message (part one)
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, I'm going to focus on nitpicking first. I blushed and sat down. I plopped my backpack onto the floor next to me. It ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Changing Seasons Part One
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Okay, I'm going to do the nitpicking first, and then tell you what I think of it. The smell of Maple syrup filled the ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: The Story (Not Official Title)
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Wow, this piece is awesome. I love it! You have great description, believable characters, and I like how you end it. I do have ...
Mar 5, 2015 -
Re: The Hidden Lover
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Okay, I had a few problems with this pieces, just little ones that will be easy to fix. You need to describe the docks ...
Mar 4, 2015 -
Re: ***Orion***
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, this is pretty long. Like REALLY long. You need to post each Chapter individually. So, the prologue goes first, then you post the ...
Mar 3, 2015 -
Re: Always Love You. Part 1.
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, this has a lot of potential. It's kinda rough, so let's see what I can do to help with that. I heard noises ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: The Cursed, Pt. 1
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, let's see what I can find... ;) Sensible, was what her mother Irma defined them That's HOW her mother defined them. Not what. ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: The Girl Who Became an Island
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, this is unusual. :D Kinda cool. Looking at it, I don't really see anything that needs to be fixed, but I will go ...
Feb 24, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 5.1
Heya, your incredibly intelligent sister here for a review. I'm going to here about that later, aren't I. Well, anyways, let's see what horrible mistakes you made. making sure that ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The Perfect Baby Doll Chapter 1
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, I'm going to start right off with the nitpicks, and move onto what I think about it at the end. Her husband, who ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: The King
Heya, Chrissy here for a review! Well, this is pretty awesome. You are good at putting images in peoples head, and only using a few words while you do it. ...
Feb 19, 2015